Successful people usually take unique paths in their life, different from those of ordinary people. I agree with the statement that successful people try new things and take risks. I have many reasons for my stance which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, some people prefer to climb the ladder of success step by step, while others have unusual methods of handling things. They are often more adventurous and not afraid to make some calculated risks. For example, look at the great inventors throughout the history, you will find that they always had the guts to go against what is common or prevalent int their times. A vivid example of smart and courageous persons is Isaac Newton, who followed unprecedented techniques that led to the theory of gravity.
In addition, the success is always associated with taking risks. If someone has followed the traditional methods because he is not willing to take risky or unknown track, he will reach to traditional outcome, not something impressing like those who are self-confident to cross the boundary of unknown. Another impressive example from the history is the famous traveler Christopher Coulombs who discovered the new world or the new continent of America. If such a man did not have the curiosity and the spirit of adventure, he would not even think of making such a dangerous journey.
Admittedly, some could argue that those who take risks and try new things are liable to failure because they follow unknown methods. However, I believe that without those people who decided to go beyond the limits, our world would not have such discoveries and inventions in all fields of life, so I think those people who like to follow their passion and try unfamiliar ways in their lives have more chances for success.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that individuals who have the tendency to take risks and try new things have better chances for success. .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and try new things are liable to failure because they follow unknown methods. How...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...things have better chances for success. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94785276074 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58817874391 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542944785276 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9352116192 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191752687437 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810348397543 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750600268024 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123679212985 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483664038928 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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