It is no doubt that successful people have unique talents and qualities. Some people argue that they are successful for they do what they familiar with, however, I believe that is trying new things and taking risks for the following reasons.
To begin with, the modern society is developing so fast that people have to adapt it as soon as possible to be successful. If you keep on the traditional works, you will fall behind other people who have been successful. For example, no one could imagine the popular of smart phones ten years ago and so many profits in this area that various of companies are competing with each other. Like Apple, the first which tries smart phones and takes risks, becomes one of the richest companies in an unbelievable fast speed. On the contrary, once the biggest phone company, Nokie still concentrated on traditional phones causing it declined. Who can first adapt to the fast developed world, who can success.
Then, as the old saying goes that no risks, no successes. Since chances always company with risks, there is no way to success without any risks. Take myself for instance, two choices are faced when I graduated from the university. One is to still study in this university for master’s degree without risk, the second is to study aboard without knowing which university admits me. The second looks like an adventure or a gambling because it is possible that none of these universities admits me. To have a better future, I choose the second and with hard working I success.
Admittedly, taking risks cannot make you always success, sometimes you may fail. Of course, this could be one important explanation why some people are afraid of taking risks and trying new things. But what they forget is that they also lose the possibility of success if they just do what they are familiar with. So those who avid of risks and new things are always failures.
Due to the aforementioned ground, I firmly consist that, to be successful, there is no way expect taking risks and trying new things.
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO-32 - Integrated Writing Task Starting in the 1960s and continuing until the 1980s, sailors in Russian submarines patrolling the North Alantic and Arctic Ocean would occasionally hear strange sounds. These underwater noises reminded the submarine crews 88
- TOEFL T P O 40 Integrated Writing Task 65
- TPO-18 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, still, then, for example, for instance, no doubt, of course, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8433048433 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51140853534 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527065527066 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3261395746 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4736842105 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236042225006 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708918708373 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781321261683 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156515762895 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109929976387 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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