In the modern era, the success in the workplace in not a piece of cake. The person has few qualities requires becoming successful such as intelligent, educated and talkative nature. From my vantage point, I agree that the well to the people is more substantial than working the hard work in the school because of few specific reasons discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, a well-being person has better personality such as communicative nature. If a person is a well-being, he can easily make friends and expand their social network. It helps to success in the job every people help him and motivate to work. For example, the person work in the group and he always discusses with their group member about the project work and he makes plan to reach the goal and also connected to each person work and helps to all people. One day he was broke out their arm and fracture he worried about the project but other people know about his work and nature, as result other team members help him to finish the project. If his nature not good then other team members not help to his work.
Furthermore, a person has good nature and well behavior to the other people. So, people like him and allure more. In business owner also seeking that type of people who has good behavior and better talkative nature because of in business conduct the huge meeting and project work there will need that patiently works and well behavior to the other worker because of it helps to increase the reputation of the business and many investors impress his nature. Eventually, many times company get the huge project and profits.
Moreover, the good nature person’s easily mixed with other workers. For example, my brother is well to other people. So, he gets also respect by other people and they have a value of my brother. Co- worker like his companion and he also mixed with them enjoy the work. He never feels the boring in the office work because of whole day time easily pass with working with his fellows.
In conclusion, the working person should have well-being nature to success in the job because of every people help him, it is the good skill that attracts to investors and helps to expand the business, Besides, the not feel tedious and enjoy the work with other fellows.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 652, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...members help him to finish the project. If his nature not good then other team mem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69825436409 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35089227438 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438902743142 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3452039673 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1578947368 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1052631579 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11208554198 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467939661352 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435423570644 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845958120201 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448924822074 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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