There are certain considerations and factors which everyone can take into account to examine or investigate people’s opinion. I defiantly believe that it is more important to work fast and making risks. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. To substantiate my case, the following paragraphs illustrate my reasons to elaborate my preference.
To begin with, nowadays saving time is a significant factor to gain profits. In other words, people tend to do their tasks faster than before to save their time to do other activities. For example, in architectural firm architects prefer to work with software instead of hand drawings in order to not to waste their time. Moreover, in modern life, time equals with gold. Hence, if you waste your time, it means you put your gold into trash.
Furthermore, by risk making you can experience many accomplishments. In fact, when you are conservative you cannot learn and experience innovative and novel subjects. Besides, many successful people around the world have made risks to be prosperous. For instance, Steven Paul Jobs, who was the co-founder of Apple Company made risk to gain his goal. He thought that he is intelligent enough to stablish a new brand of digital instrument. Therefore, risk making contributes him and his friend to be a number one in technology and computer science.
Finally, working quickly and risk taking can teach you many new lessons which you did not learn them before. Sometimes our mistakes are our best teachers. As a matter of fact, Billie Jean King, who is a famous tennis player in the world, mentioned in her autobiography that she took lots of risks to gain gold medal and high rank in sports. In addition, although she was not sure about her victory, she was practicing a lot and hired the most expensive instructor in the world to attain achievement in Tennis play. Meanwhile, not only she wastes her money but also she gain much more benefits by taking risk.
Due to aforementioned ground, all folks should bear in mind that they must be quick in their works and take risks in order to achieve accomplishments in their lives. Participation of saving time, experience and learning more are my prime and conspicuous supports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks being'.
Suggestion: risks being
...ssful people around the world have made risks to be prosperous. For instance, Steven Paul J...
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Line 7, column 570, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gains'.
Suggestion: gains
... only she wastes her money but also she gain much more benefits by taking risk. D...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a matter of fact, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99733333333 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84348956194 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9872939988 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1818181818 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214579540582 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567964209642 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489602060471 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104168411863 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147901850245 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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