The high pace is one of the conspicuous aspects of the modern era especially in technology and science improvements. There are many controversial arguments about the trade off between velocity and care. Some people believe that we should do works quickly, even this speed increase the probablity of making mistakes. I disagrees with this statement and from my perspective, we should do our work with a calculated care. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborate my points of view.
First exquisite point to be mentioned is that some mistakes have adverse effect on people lives. In better words, some mistakes might hurt people and these damages cannnot be compensate anyway. Take Boieng company as example, thesedays one model of its' airplanes have some serious problems and two number of this model airplanes crashed in a short time in different places and about three hundred people would be killed. Today, boeing presented a reporttion and they told that there is a problem in plane's body. Therefore, for a careless mistakes, three hundreds people died and no body can do anything for the spouses, chidren, parents and friends of the victims. As a result, some mitakes are fatal and they have bitter results.
The second point that comes to my mind is that some mistakes cause repetition. In other words, sometimes we do some works quickly for saving time, but some mistake force us to spend more time for doing again that work. For instance, my friend and me began to do our thesis at the same time. She just attach a much importance to fininsh her thesis as soon as possible, while I ponder over each issue and question. Finally, she wrote whole of her thesis and she present her thesis on the judging day. Some refrees -professors who judge his thesis- found some basic problems in her work and they coerced her to reform these basic problems. Finally, she was successful to finish her thesis two months later than me. Hence, some times doing works quickly not only is not time efficient but also is time wasting.
The last but not least, thesedays there is a intensive competition among producers to present thier cut-edging models earlier than their rivals. Since, they want to increase their sales and acquire more maker share. Although, this strategy is so useful, there are many cases that a mistake damage the company reputation and the new poduct sale plunges awfully. For example, when Samsung supplied its' new high tech cell phone few years ago, the cell phone sale was great and people bought millions ones, but after two weeks some problems of the new cell phone bacame clear, there was a problem in battery and it exploded suddenly. All the media coverd this mistake and nobody else buy this cell phone. In result, doing works quickly has several advantages, but a simple mistake can eleminiate all those benifits.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned paragraphs, some mistaks are so important and we cannot ignore these problems just for bieng quick.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'disagree'
Suggestion: disagree
...se the probablity of making mistakes. I disagrees with this statement and from my perspec...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mistake'?
Suggestion: mistake
... planes body. Therefore, for a careless mistakes, three hundreds people died and no body...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...istakes, three hundreds people died and no body can do anything for the spouses, chidre...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: A_MUCH_NN1[1]
Message: Maybe you should omit the article "a", leaving only 'much'.
Suggestion: much
...hesis at the same time. She just attach a much importance to fininsh her thesis as soo...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... last but not least, thesedays there is a intensive competition among producers t...
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Line 7, column 681, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[4]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'buys'.
Suggestion: buys
...dia coverd this mistake and nobody else buy this cell phone. In result, doing works...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2495.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96023856859 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46277215569 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556660039761 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0089981704 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9615384615 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3461538462 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57692307692 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.85842293907 415% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121205006155 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347278160878 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418797493072 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694301163825 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030615198286 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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