Doing job is very important for everyone- either people can takeover the father's jobs or find their own way of doing the jobs. Some feels like very safe and secure when they are following their parent's occupation. But, we are live in 21st century with more knowledge and academic skill that give lot of opportunities for young people, so strong disagree the statement which says parent's jobs better than other jobs for the following reasons.
To begin with, to be respectable person in the society one should have good education, skill and talent in his field. For example, some parents not educated by doing some hardwork they might become rich, but still, they want their kids to get good education like doctor, engineer and so on. The reason is they do not want kids suffer like them. Moreover, imagine that the same kid got the job in police department they feel very prod about their son, that is what all they want from children nothing else more. May be, parent's job easy to carryout because they know from the beginning.
In additionally, every kids are unique and their ambitions are entirely different from their parents thinking, we must force kids for our desire which is not fair to do so. For example, there was one kid in the school he was more interested become a pharmacist and his father was running small cycle business from generation to generation. Now, he is working as senior pharmacist in Ram company. At present,both father and son very happy that job which decided to do. They joy they felt is very difficult explain in words.
Finally, diversity is strength not weakness. When someone doing the jobs of their parents from long time there wont be any growth in their life because of monotonous, it is really boring aspect. Think that, father is police officer, mother-teacher and son- scientist, these different jobs make great strength to country rather doing their parent's job. May be some easiest way secure the parent's due to need not work hard for the survival. But, that is not all about our life.
To conclude that one should to be respectable, unique person and to strength the economy, one should do their interestes jobs rather than going to do boring job which they parents did.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mic skill that give lot of opportunities for young people, so strong disagree the...
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Line 7, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , both
...or pharmacist in Ram company. At present,both father and son very happy that job whi...
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Line 7, column 427, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... company. At present,both father and son very happy that job which decided to do....
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Line 10, column 59, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... is strength not weakness. When someone doing the jobs of their parents from long tim...
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Line 10, column 357, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...try rather doing their parents job. May be some easiest way secure the parents due...
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Line 13, column 173, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
... than going to do boring job which they parents did.
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Line 13, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o do boring job which they parents did.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82291666667 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36728920069 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536458333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0754833577 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4736842105 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372098233742 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117326537191 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096049178336 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243269215518 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843219551414 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.