Every parent’s dream a good future for their child, but doctors and engineers are not the ends of life. In order to fulfill the dream; parent should allow their child to choose career of his/her interest..... Life is given once.... So enjoy it… Don't make it a burden on yourselves...We should try everything in our life… Parents should never decide their child's career path.
It's not the parent's life, it's the child's. The child has to learn to make decisions of their own in life and then deal with the consequences. Parents need to let go a little bit and let their kids live their lives. If they're happy with what they decide for their future, then that's all that matters. Many people do not enjoy life as much when they dislike their job, and sometimes this can turn into depression. No matter how prestigious or stable a job can seem to a parent, it may not appeal to the kid, who might later despair over ending up in the wrong job (because of their parents) and not being able to easily get out to pursue their dream career. The stable job does not equal happy job. The prestigious job does not equal happy job. What your child chooses and would like to pursue equals is the solution to a long, enjoyable career. Young people are supposed to have a chance to make their own decisions and to live its consequences even if it means failure because life is not about passing or failing it’s about learning from our mistakes and try not to repeat them. After all, we are humans and all humans make mistakes.
By the advent of technologies, the abilities and skills of children are higher than those of parents so they should select certain jobs to fulfill their ability. For instance, these days, the most proportion of kids is struggling with a computer and they have lots of information about computer literacy. In contrast, the parents do not have enough knowledge about computer and its application. It is clear that children as a future generation should improve their position and choose suitable jobs that are related to this technology.
In addition, when children have different jobs from their parents’ jobs, they can be more independent with high confidence because they can prove their ability to their family in a different way. As an example, you can imagine someone whose parents are a carpenter with big workshop. While he is a successful computer programmer with high confidence because he follows his interest and could achieve his goals which would never happen if he wanted to choose his parents’ vocation.
As all things considered, it is true that choosing the same parents' career has many merits such as getting a lot of resources easier and support from them which help children to get success in a short time but the merits of choosing their own jobs alone far weigh the merits of choosing the same parents' career to be happier while they are achieving their goals and by advent the technology the children have a different interest than their parent. Therefore, they should their own career.
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Essay evaluation report
Every parent’s dream a good future for their child
Every parent’s dream is a good future for their child
Therefore, they should their own career.
Therefore, they should have their own career.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 532 350
No. of Characters: 2436 1500
No. of Different Words: 246 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.803 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.579 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.291 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 161 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.175 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.28 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.5 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.168 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Every parent's dream a good future ...
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Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...... Life is given once.... So enjoy it… Dont make it a burden on yourselves...We sho...
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Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...… Dont make it a burden on yourselves...We should try everything in our life… Pare...
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Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...er decide their childs career path. Its not the parents life, its the childs. T...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...eir childs career path. Its not the parents life, its the childs. The child has to ...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...eer path. Its not the parents life, its the childs. The child has to learn to m...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... consequences. Parents need to let go a little bit and let their kids live their lives. If...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...and let their kids live their lives. If theyre happy with what they decide for their f...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...what they decide for their future, then thats all that matters. Many people do not en...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...humans and all humans make mistakes. By the advent of technologies, the abili...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that are related to this technology. In addition, when children have differen...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...can prove their ability to their family in a different way. As an example, you can imagine someone...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to choose his parents' vocation. As all things considered, it is ...
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Line 9, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dvent the technology the children have a different interest than their parent. Th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'after all', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236394557823 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.156462585034 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0833333333333 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0442176870748 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0884353741497 0.0685040099705 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.100340136054 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0272108843537 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49316961775 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0357142857143 0.0309702414327 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00510204081633 0.00188951952338 270% => OK
Determiners: 0.0799319727891 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0272108843537 0.0209618222197 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0187074829932 0.0139019557991 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3080.0 2387.08602151 129% => OK
No of words: 528.0 408.028673835 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83333333333 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318181818182 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.215909090909 0.251872472559 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13446969697 0.174417080927 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0890151515152 0.112833075102 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49316961775 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.4967409595 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.9565217391 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.9896654432 48.84282405 184% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.913043478 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9565217391 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.608695652174 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.54480286738 252% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.54743083 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.25882352941 1.45489161554 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406438713958 0.300154397459 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152493734672 0.103427244359 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.17003207814 0.0752933317313 226% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481152655161 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176532244823 0.151897553556 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13624705836 0.114077575197 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794293920289 0.0781384742642 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290847111827 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0913501191381 0.067059652881 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261803774749 0.210909579961 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396709363272 0.0618886996521 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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