Nowadays, science and technology are developed. So, jobs need more skills than in the past. Therefore, children’s education is vital to prepare them for their future. Therefore, parents want their children to have a good education. While some may think parent’s behaviors have not changed about their children’s education, I believed that parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
First, parents spend more time with their children for doing their assignment. When I was a teenager, I did all my homework by myself. My parents asked me to get the best marks. But, they did not help me to do them. However, these days parents take more time with their children for their education. They try to assign more time to help their children to do their homework.
Second, schools want parents to get involved in the school’s programs more than before. I remember when I was students, my parents got invited to school only once or twice each year. But, today they got invited at least once every month. Schools want parents to get more information about the progress of their children. They let them be aware of the weaknesses and strengths of children. Also, they talk about how children’s behavior is in school. Besides, Schools offer some training programs for parents. These programs are about what problems their children are facing, what their interests are and how they should behave with them.
To sum up, Parents take more time for their children’s education as compared to the past. They assign time for their children’s assignment. Also, they take a part in school’s programs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, may, second, so, therefore, while, at least, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16483516484 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88009006048 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479853479853 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0361951618 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0909090909 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4090909091 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318163576084 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111151091536 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094617058564 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230988672038 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721816682411 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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