In today's modern world education is most important part in our life, it is not doubtful, good education give betterment in our carriers. From ancient period to modern world parent are more concentrating on their kids studies but when measure who is more concern about their children carrier whether earlier parents or today's parent then answer is definitely today's parents giving much important for their kids education. In order to prove my statements, I want to explore historical events.
First of all, earlier people used to their parents jobs like business, native medicine, trading and so on. So, that time parents are least bother about their study because they have enough wealth and business for their kids and further female never went to any kind jobs simply they did house choir jobs that is reason older parents least important to their kids education. After, industrial revolution there was plenty job opening in larger scale that made the trend to change in diverse ways. Thereafter, our modern parents started concentrating on their children education very intensively.
Secondly, Nowadays to get menial jobs also company are looking for the minimum qualification so that the worker can work more diplomatically than workers. Further, Some of the parents are resigning their job for their children education, for example near my house one lady quit the job in order to teach son who studying tenth grade. She told that this is the crucial exam for my son so less care about job, if, son gets A grade in the class that is more than enough for me. Earlier parents they did not do like that. They says if he gets good marks OK, if not also no problem for them.
Thirdly, today's world is full competition not like earlier time. For the decent survive everyone must have some degree in their hands and modern parents well aware about it. Further, they know the negative consequence of illiterate so that reasons they are concentrating and spending time on their children education rather than personal activities whereas older parents, they just very much interested in their social prestige and dignity.
Finally, more modern parents sending their further higher study to other countries, recently, the rate of studying in abroad increased dramatically. This shows that modern parents more concentrating on their children than older parents.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265882352941 0.229887763892 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.117647058824 0.158761421928 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115294117647 0.0866891130778 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0847058823529 0.046263068375 183% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0823529411765 0.0685040099705 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129411764706 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0305882352941 0.0351676179071 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49235220934 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0235294117647 0.0309702414327 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0470588235294 0.0887237588012 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00470588235294 0.0209618222197 22% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0141176470588 0.0139019557991 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2402.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 387.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.20671834625 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356589147287 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260981912145 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157622739018 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100775193798 0.112833075102 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49235220934 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 61.0066740212 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7647058824 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5088495987 48.84282405 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.294117647 120.699889404 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.941176470588 0.644075263715 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.54480286738 343% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.8628970968 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.4958677686 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320284666532 0.300154397459 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100636280879 0.103427244359 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0845779857642 0.0752933317313 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.521865203852 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177177182674 0.151897553556 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125092009828 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577223268777 0.0781384742642 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.287982642261 0.336927656856 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0204348981273 0.067059652881 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21804439049 0.210909579961 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130878034191 0.0618886996521 21% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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