As compared with past, parents are more involved in their children's education.Yes, i agree with the statement because in previous days parent were conscious only for giving birth and after few years they allow their daughters and sons to marriage in young age and children were deprived of education.Some other opinion which i want to explore are as follows;
All most all parents were uneducated in the past and they don't have any idea or knowledge about quality education.They don't think education is necessary for them.I think they were not known about the importance of quality education.Specially parent didn't give education for girls because they thought that girls have to get marriage and they have to go others house so it is not necessary to give them education.Some parents rarely used to give education to sons only thinking that boys will care parents at the old age and boys are always with them till to death.In previous days girls were deprived of education but boys have some opportunities to some extent.
But i think because of modern times and concept nowadays most of the parents are well known about the importance of quality education.They started to give equal importance to both sons and daughters.They started to give education to both sons and daughters so that girls also can focus on their career and can dream for successful future.Parents are against the marriage at early age and they started to giving more priority to their study and aims.Parents are ready to leave luxurious and comfortable life to provide more and more support for their children education.Parents are fulfilling all the requirements of their children.So due to these reason we can know that parents today are more involved in their children's education then parents in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07457627119 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92948830897 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467796610169 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.6003584229 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 147.0 20.1344086022 730% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.0 48.9658058833 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 748.5 100.406767564 745% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 147.5 20.6045352989 716% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.45110844103 349% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237517113344 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19959561559 0.076458572812 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00326876724242 0.0737576698707 4% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190473078079 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054206576252 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 76.2 11.7677419355 648% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -77.73 58.1214874552 -134% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 60.6 10.1575268817 597% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.31 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.55 8.01818996416 169% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 10.002688172 590% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 60.8 10.0537634409 605% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.247311828 595% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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