In contemporary world, people spend their days as learning, business and teaching, which has a succinct rate of time for all these works. People who is preserver to their work are usually five days a week for shorter hours where as some people enjoy to work for longer hours only for three day a week. Indeed, people have enough time to celebrate their life with friends and family in those four days of holiday. From where I stand, I support working five days a week for shorter hours views and elaborate my reasons in the following essay.
At first blush, I have to concede that working three day a week helps us to relaxed through the other day of week which are holiday and travelling different holiday vacations resort have benefited people to refresh. First and foremost, people have many positive impact from this schedule as it enhance happiness with being compatible with friends and families. For supporting instance, people have abundant energy left after having four-days of holiday which helps these people to concentrate on theirs work more effectively and meticulous to error. Besides, people will cheer their life with more jovial and jocund as they have enough time invest these day for useful work like environmental protections, raising awareness about different issues. It is not hard to clarify that people working five day a week do not have time for these social works.
Notwithstanding the evidence of improving society and people personal life with these methods, it is too hasty to conclude that three day work will boon people life and company works. The first reason undermining this idea is people who work will be pressured in those three day work for longer hours to get better result of the company, when people work assiduously they required to rest which is not possible as they have long hour to finish the plenty of works. People will face health problem thereby spending more time to work in a single day such as insomnia, anemia and other pertinent health issues. In additions, people will be sick and cannot spend their free time to celebrate with friends and family. In fact, company will also go in loss as due to the small amount of time to finish the projects or deals. Understandably, compared to the five days work, three day work is more tiresome.
Worse still, people have more chances to get into depressions. First, due to the plethora of work to do in a specific days with long hours which caused headache by pressurizing work. Second, company wants a five day work in which people will have to work shorter hours which will uplift both the company and people values and profits whereas company not hire three day worker in their company. As a consequence, people will loss the promotions and also the job which further degrades their living standard. Therefore, five day work with shorter hour have mushroom advantage as those of three day work.
To sum up, in spite of a long days of holiday and rest time, the shorting time to focus on jobs and work will results in hampering health of their's own, reducing the profits of company and loosing their own career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ally five days a week for shorter hours where as some people enjoy to work for longer ho...
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Line 3, column 649, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
... jocund as they have enough time invest these day for useful work like environmental prot...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'day'?
Suggestion: day
...he plethora of work to do in a specific days with long hours which caused headache b...
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Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'day'?
Suggestion: day
... work. To sum up, in spite of a long days of holiday and rest time, the shorting ...
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...ing time to focus on jobs and work will results in hampering health of theirs own, redu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, whereas, in addition, in fact, such as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2588.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 537.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81936685289 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38603229146 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435754189944 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 786.6 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7086285437 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.238095238 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354726637258 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15080195447 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103879597557 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238565637888 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920739103753 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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