People have different desires, wishes and plans but there is one goal that is the same for most of us: having a career that we love and feel comfortable in. One factor that effects our progress and effectiveness in the workspaces is the time period that we are working. This is, in fact, a matter of choice that which strategy, working long in fewer days or short in more days, is better and effective for employees. I personally agree with this statement and the rationale behind this choice of mine is as follows.
First and foremost, if employees were able to work three days in a week that means that they had two more days to pursue something else, maybe a hobby, a sport, or a new instrument, that they always loved and didn't have time for. Moreover, they can even learn new things, study part time in another area and expand their knowledge. A good example can raise from my own life, I am a software programmer in a company in which I am working five days in a week, like every other employee. My future goal is to have my own startup, and be the boss of my own company. Although, this dream is, yet, reachable if I work very hard, but I could do it in less amount of time if I would have more days and time to allocate to work toward my dream. However, now, I should work in the nights after I come from my day job but this way my every hour will be work, as opposed to having two more days for my own which I could work half of it and devote the rest for entertainment and resting.
Furthermore, people would have more time to spend with their families and having family trips. People, would separate their work days from the entertaining day. Imagine, one who is working from morning till noon, when come home he/she would be exhausted and tired and prefer to rest or do nothing the rest of the day either. I agree that it would be more frustrating to work longer period of time, but people would have a lot more motivation since it was just for three days and they would have the rest of the week for concentrating on rather enjoyable things, which can be spending time with their families. I strongly believe that individuals are very flexible and can adapt themselves with every situation, even if it is about thirteen hours work in a day.
To sum up, I think that even it's hard for employees to work longer in a day, but they would have higher motives to do so, as they could find more time to spend time with their families and following another hobby or learning new stuff.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... instrument, that they always loved and didnt have time for. Moreover, they can even ...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
..., they can even learn new things, study part time in another area and expand their knowle...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ould be more frustrating to work longer period of time, but people would have a lot more motiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, i think, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37124463519 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35148976933 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467811158798 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1982402786 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.3125 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.125 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321346451206 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11586258438 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805860854023 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196774420692 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669023129551 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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