In modern era, changing is so rapid which makes a lot of effects on humans' life. One of prominent issue in this regard is human being satisfaction and hapiness. Whether these fast changes make human fell better or not. Some people think that these rapid changes have rendered humans' live more convenient which means it brings felling of happines for them. But, I hold the opposit perspective because of some noticable reasons. The ensuing paragraphs will delve into my oints of view.
To begin with, most of the we can not be as fast as changes. These changes include the improvement of technology and industry all over the worlds which produce so many development devices for us. While, all the people would access to watch these novel technologies, all of them can not provide them for themselves. Therefore, it causes depressed feeling for whom can not achieve new devices. For instance, recently a survey on this topic in 10 different schools in my city has been done. This survey indicates that most of student want their parents provide them new update cellphones or other new devices which most of them are usually expensive. The parents can not afford whatever their child wants because they can not earn as much as money to provide all new devices for children, thus, they are always feeling unhappy
In addition, some of these changes have deleterious affects on environment which causes some dramatic problems for us. Changes always come with changing environment for using sources like fossil fuels to provide energy for changes or damaging land to make factories. All of these changes seriously damage our environment which lead to air and water pollution. Both air and water pollution cause some diseases for us which absolutely decrease our satisfaction feeling. For example, I live in metropolitan city which was affected by a lot changes that make a serious air pollution. Most of people plague by the air pollution ,thus, they are less happy that people were in healthy environment in the past.
By the way of conclusion, although, these rapid changes can be beneficial for us, they causes feeling unsatisfactory due to mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...o rapid which makes a lot of effects on humans life. One of prominent issue in this re...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'we'?
Suggestion: the; we
...ints of view. To begin with, most of the we can not be as fast as changes. These ch...
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Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'serious air pollution'.
Suggestion: serious air pollution
...was affected by a lot changes that make a serious air pollution. Most of people plague by the air pollu...
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Line 5, column 581, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...nges that make a serious air pollution. Most of people plague by the air pollution ,thus, they...
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Line 5, column 623, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...st of people plague by the air pollution ,thus, they are less happy that people we...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
... changes can be beneficial for us, they causes feeling unsatisfactory due to mentioned...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, by the way, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01666666667 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58945511214 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538888888889 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5589870792 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0526315789 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116275012189 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408628505312 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04520557703 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666922053992 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336570527249 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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