In this day and age of modernization, although there are more facilities that make the life easier for anybody, people are confronting more problems as well. The question of whether people are less happy in this modern era, has generated a great deal of debate among people from all walk of life. While different people have distinct ideas toward this issue, in my opinion, it is true that people are less satisfied nowadays. Throughout the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, the foremost reason why I am supporting this view lies in the fact that professionalism plays a paramount role in this modern era. Therefore, people have to work a lot more compare to past inorder to reach their dreams, since competence between individuals has increased and reached into its apex. This simply indicates more severe condition that people should go through and therefore more dissatisfaction.
Another exquisite reason which should mentions here is that by invention of Internet and social apps, people are more aware of others from even different countries. This fact although provides some benefits, has some negative effects as well that is people tend to compare themselves with others specially the wealthy ones. This lead to be disappointed of your life and being jealous of theirs.
The other equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is that not only finding a sufficient job is much tough than in that past but also the costs of life has increased a lot. In the past youngsters just need to follow their families' career. Also there has not been much to pay for. In contrast, ones need to spend so many years educating inorder to possibly find a job. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what has been elaborated above. Here I depict one of my own experiences. I have been studing for many years to be ready to have a professional job in future, yet I could not have find any. Besides, there are a lot of thing I should spend for. Things such as the university expenses, entertainment and so on.
To recapitulate, taking all aforementioned reasons into account, it can be authentically concluded that from my vantage point, people are less happy with their life in contrast to past since they are more pressured and stressed to find a career to cover their expenses, they have to compete more, and they are dissatisfied with their life comparing it with others.
- TPO45 In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better to able to make decision about their own lives 76
- The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to older people 66
- TPO 41 Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harmful chemicals may be doing 78
- TPO 56 70
- TPO54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 43
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
... are confronting more problems as well. The question of whether people are less happy in this modern er...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'mention'
Suggestion: mention
... Another exquisite reason which should mentions here is that by invention of Internet a...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...t need to follow their families career. Also there has not been much to pay for. In ...
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Line 7, column 574, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... to be ready to have a professional job in future, yet I could not have find any. Besides...
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Line 7, column 606, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
...nal job in future, yet I could not have find any. Besides, there are a lot of thing ...
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Line 7, column 635, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...d not have find any. Besides, there are a lot of thing I should spend for. Things such as the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90120481928 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73866208132 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544578313253 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4118162491 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.7 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202998287239 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544270946019 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544950154318 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120428651831 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528812492214 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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