In the modern society, there’s no doubt that team working has become one of the most important skills for both children and adults. Whether students should work alone or together has been an issue of public interest and concern. Personally, I totally approve the point that working together can make students learn more effectively for the following reasons.
To begin with, they can fully communicate with each other by working together. More specifically, through communication, it supplies an excellent chance of expression their opinions and learning the advantages of others For example, when I was in a summer school and required to make a presentation about culture. Not working alone, I chose to work in a team with four students who came from different countries. With a whole day’s communication, I got a better knowledge of other countries culture so that the presentation contained not only the culture of my country but also the culture of others. The professor gives me a high evaluation. It is undeniable that people can open their horizon by working together.
Moreover, working together reduces time effectively. Let’s think about if you have to work alone, you have to waste lots of time on preparation and the decision of how to work. On the contrary, by working together, you just need to care about your own tasks that it is a really effective way to save time. According to a research by the Peking University in 2016, the efficiency of working together is two times more than working alone in most situations. For a instance, when working together, you can ask any question to your partners who have the ability to offer reasonable suggestions whenever you are in trouble. Comparing with no one’s help, it saves much time for no need of thinking it many days. In fact, communication is the best way to overcome a difficulty in a short time.
Admittedly, sometimes working alone is also necessary such as studying math problems and final projects. In fact, these conditions are limit, especially in the modern society even the physicists have to work in a large group. Obviously, how to work together becomes a crucial factor for success and the better ability of community, the better possibility of success.
Due to aforementioned reasons, it’s easy to draw a conclusion that working together is more effectively than working alone for better communication and saving more time.
- TPO-44 - Integrated Writing Task In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to 70
- TOEFL T P O 40 Integrated Writing Task 65
- TPO-44 - Integrated Writing Task In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to 61
- TPO-21 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, for example, in fact, no doubt, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.105 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92513247563 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5054835476 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296145831433 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947131139184 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607922290344 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169572791223 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376792686703 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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