Teamwork has a significant effect on our live. It always determines our level of success. Working together is a great way to improve our skills. Some people believe that working alone as a student is better than working with others to assign a project. Others disagree. Personally, I agree that students should do their assignments with a group of people I feel this way for two important reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, the most prominent point to be mentioned is that working together can help the students to interact with people with different considerations, attitudes, and perspectives. If the one deals with various people, he can make unbelievable outbreaks. This will help the students to excel in their future career to find more jobs easily. My own experience is a compelling illustration of this. When I was at university, I had to do a presentation in my biology class which demanded a lot of research. My professor asked me and many students to work in groups to help each other. I was so shy and introverted, therefore, I started to talk to many students which boosted my self confidence and comprehension. Working together eliminated any feelings of discomfort. After I finished the class, I learned how to deal with people, solve problems and share my opinions with facts. This experience taught me that the students who work in a group is better than working alone.
The second rationale behind my idea is rooted in the fact that working with a variety of people can make it easier to brainstorm novel ideas. As everyone has different ethnics and cultures, it helps you to get more information and be more knowledgeable Knowledge is the sum of all theoretical facts and experiences a human being collects during his whole life. I have to admit that my idea is profoundly influenced by my sister's example. She started to take courses after university to learn more about her field because she did not have too many ideas. As soon she started the course, she started to gain more knowledge which help her to more successful in her field. If she did not take this course, she would not be thriving like she is today.
As you can see, working with your classmates is one of the effective way to gain more knowledge and is much better than working alone.
In conclusion, I believe that working together is better than working individually. This is because it can make it easier to interact with people, and because it can help you to get new ideas. Everyone should recognize the importance and the effectiveness of working as a team work as it increases our social skills which is a great way to ensure more prosperous life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their assignments with a group of people I feel this way for two important reason...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78401727862 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80077545785 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470842332613 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0631735829 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.52 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317427760234 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878032209564 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790435579674 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197091962316 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718232811343 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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