Living is full of downs and upsups and downs, and so people always are experiencing a new conditions which are strange for them. The Satisfaction satisfaction of live depends on individualsindividuals' thoughts and expections and differs from a person to other one. I strongly believe that the world fast changes not only increase the happiness in people, but also persuade them to be active and fast just as the changes velocity. In the following paragraph, I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
I think that although the chengeschanges accelerate acceleration is so fast, individuals if can adapt themselves to these variations, they can easily find new way to success and so be satisfied from their lives. That is, new challenges open new doors of success, and people who are use these opportunities can find a creative and attractive way to achieve their goals. And when a person can meet his aims, he will be glad and be satisfied from his live. For example, my friend always tries to use new software in engineering field, so he can design new complicated features that increase his morale and help him to adapt himself to new changes both new engineering software and new comlicated engineering features.
In addition, in my view, the quick changes give this opportunity for people to gain new knowledge about the environment and universe and so increase their information. having enough knowledge can leads to new change in human life and thoughts. Using this new thoughts people can improve their living and attempt to increase the happiness in the family. For instance, having i
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
...so people always are experiencing a new conditions which are strange for them. The Satisfa...
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Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Satisfaction
...ditions which are strange for them. The Satisfaction satisfaction of live depends on individualsindividua...
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Line 1, column 413, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'changes'' or 'change's'?
Suggestion: changes'; change's
... them to be active and fast just as the changes velocity. In the following paragraph, I...
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Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...s open new doors of success, and people who are use these opportunities can find a crea...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...erse and so increase their information. having enough knowledge can leads to new chang...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...nformation. having enough knowledge can leads to new change in human life and thought...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 268.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01119402985 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99063614377 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541044776119 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9800034958 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.916666667 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0252699414194 0.236089414692 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0104427906668 0.076458572812 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0145912757861 0.0737576698707 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0180491492125 0.150856017488 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00571044083597 0.0645574589148 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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