TPO 36- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children(five to ten years old) than to spend money on universit
education is one of the most important issue for any country. Different levels of human education in a standard educational system have their own importance and they should be discussed by expertise. I won’t pretend to be an expert but based on my knowledge and information I lean toward this idea which university educations are much important than elementary school learning. Following are some important reason to illustrate my point of view.
First of all, elementary education is so simple and they need some simple equipment. Students in elementary classes only learn basic concept of science and mathematics or art and literature. To learn these materials teachers who get their bachelor in one field like as education can cope with these classes. elementary classes do not need high tech equipment or equipped laberoatory to run. Overall definite budgets can provide a good educational environment for young children.
Secondly, university disciplines are in diverse fields. they cover complete needs of human societies. In this high speed technological world, a lot of innovation and creation are born everyday in universities and professional systems which almost all of them are made by educated people. they spend a lot of their life in laboratories and university classes. Huge amount of budget were spent to establish these settings. universities need a lot of expensive instrument and high purity materials to do science edge experiments. All of these needs money, the government should spend the bigger portion of budget for university to assure their progress.
To shorten a long story, with respect to children and pay enough attention to their education, honestly we should confess that universities education are much more expensive and in higher level which they need more money. It seems any government who pay more attention in high level education can benefit more. To achieve more success government should expand universities and high level professional education
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, honestly, if, second, secondly, so, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39616613419 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94490366806 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7290771169 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8947368421 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203170753734 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638528693603 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578020983764 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120863825163 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287786346038 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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