Undoubtedly, with the advent of technology the world has altered and explicitly all things have developed in various aspects. In my estimation, I think that predicting for being successful in a new business is more difficult than that of past due to increasing complication in trading, progressing in competition and changing the shape of new business.
Todays, the life has been more complicated in compared to the past in all over the world. Surely, having a job can be mentioned as an essential needs for everyone in anywhere. Every year or every month many careers are emerging in the various location like each country and each city, therefore, declaring this point that a new job would be successful or would be secure is hard than that of the past. Take the economic situation in each country as an example. According to the economists, many countries experience a crucial inflation and this point provides circumstances that there is no guaranty for securing and succeeding new business. Thus, compared to the past complication in economy may cause to
In addition, the population is growing today and today and the societies need to provide some living facilities for own people. Therefore, incredibly demanding job increases exponentially in all over the world. This point can lead to prosper of competition in gaining money which can cause to provide the vague environment for prediction of future. For instance, when a new career appears, it will have a struggle whit old careers which have started many years ago. Furthermore, new career needs to invest much money and have a powerful management. In deed, many of new jobs in new days have a little chance of being successful if they do not have any new idea.
Finally, due to change the new world in different aspects, the shape of careers have changed. Traditional business has a low chance of surviving in the new world and many jobs tend to move to new technology like the internet. Todays, many jobs eager to establish in internet base and join to electronic trading. In my opinion careers like eBay, Amazon, Google, and Alibaba are the new jobs that they have a light future in securing and succession dimension. in the result, The new electronic base career can be a good choice for choosing as a job that would lead to a secure and successful.
In sum, due to aforementioned reasons, I believe that new kind of business has a great chance of progressing and being long lasting. A career like electronic trading or some other internet based jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 706, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ast complication in economy may cause to In addition, the population is growing t...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'providing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: providing
...tition in gaining money which can cause to provide the vague environment for prediction of...
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Line 7, column 459, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...e in securing and succession dimension. in the result, The new electronic base car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91355140187 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81432095485 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474299065421 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0231975195 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.15 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100098094567 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358724016406 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270725719812 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603721891867 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253331958257 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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