In the modern era, Teachers play substantial role in our society because of help to building the knowledge and skill of our young children. However, some people believe that society without teacher is also getting the education. While other penchant that teachers were valuable for student’s education. From my vantage point, I refute the statement that teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. I choose my stance for few reasons which are discuss in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, teachers role is motivate to students in their study. In school and college also vast of professors help to failure students and encourage for hard work and practice. For example, when I was my second year in the college, I was fail in the three subject, I really felt bad and losing my confidence but my biology teacher foster me and show me positive work which were finished in my last year subject. She was support me in my all subject and gave me advice. Eventually, I gave remedial exam and got the good grades. I really gratitude for her to inspiration I get my confidence.
Furthermore, in college and school hire teachers because of they teach us. Now, advancement in every field people have grate knowledgeable. In college hire the experience and intelligent teacher who give the deep knowledge about the every subject. In contrast, some people believe that latest technology and internet using we are learning anything. But it is not possible every time, teachers are help and teach us basic knowledge to deep study in the each subject. Internet gives only information but teacher is help to understand the concept. Therefore, present era, teachers are more valuable for our society.
Moreover, teacher is also play similar role for children development. In current era, the parents’ put their child in school and tuition, most of time children spend their time with teachers. In school, teacher teach the kids about the discipline, concept of the truth and wrong things, good virtue, to make us independent and so on.. In children development teacher also play significance roles.
In conclusion, contemplating aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that teachers present markedly influence on bright future of the students. I strongly subscribe the fact that teachers are more appreciating and valuable for our society, since teacher’s motivation and knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: because they
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2010178117 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86546760066 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531806615776 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3443995603 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1666666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172968943798 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528227038171 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694430743405 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102361528718 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636270351515 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.