TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by Sar on Sun, 05/07/2017 - 16:51

Nowadays, education is much more important than last decades. Parents always ask their children to study more and they make more respect to their child`s teacher. In my opinion, I believe that teachers have the important role in succeeding our young generation. Moreover, they get better appreciation from the society.
First, students need a teacher to encourage them to continue their studies. Some of the tutors have special skills in teaching a difficult subject in school. To give an example, when I was in the first year of primary school, I had the problem to write down some words and It made me disappointed. Meanwhile, my teacher realized my difficulty and she taught me the new way of learning. Her helpfulness always makes me to thanks her because she motivated me to think in another way.
Second, the teacher can help the student to build up the brighter future due to their positive impact on their way of thinking. In addition, a good teacher increases the self-esteem of their student and learn them how to become friendliness and trustworthiness.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...courage them to continue their studies. Some of the tutors have special skills in teaching ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, while, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 1977.66487455 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 407.700716846 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98882681564 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86940992385 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 618.680645161 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6916893619 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1818181818 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0997603620436 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040589770911 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361612680802 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697046787457 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551442977737 0.0645574589148 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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