There are two schools of thought one is affirmative with the thought that the value of teachers is not decreased over time and other school disagrees. personally I have proclivity towards the thought that the value of teachers is being decreased over time.
Teachers were main sources of knowledge in the previous era. Ancient time different 'Rushi' established different schools. They were only source of knowledge. As time passed the different means of gaining knowledge were discovered like mobile, internet and kindle. Now a days internet gives any information by using single click. There is no need to visit teacher and ask doubts. As compared to internet going to teacher is like spending more time.
There is one more reason that the value of teacher is decreased because the numbers of experienced teachers is decreased Most of teachers are retired.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
... over time and other school disagrees. personally I have proclivity towards the thought t...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...vered like mobile, internet and kindle. Now a days internet gives any information by using...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...like mobile, internet and kindle. Now a days internet gives any information by using...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o need to visit teacher and ask doubts. As compared to internet going to teacher i...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the teachers') or simply say ''Most teachers''.
Suggestion: Most of the teachers; Most teachers
...rs of experienced teachers is decreased Most of teachers are retired.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 43.0788530466 12% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 1977.66487455 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 140.0 407.700716846 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16428571429 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 4.48103885553 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61778649291 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 212.727598566 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 618.680645161 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8258934218 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 5.45110844103 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143893515167 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600389023511 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429486720234 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105115825747 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309809173727 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 86.8835125448 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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