Throughout history, in all civilized societies, how to improve productivity at work has engendered copious controversies among authorities. An important question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether worker are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks during working hours or otherwise. I firmly concur with the idea that if workers have different tasks to do during working hours, they will be more satisfied. In what follows, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that doing variety of works, workers feel more productive. In fact, they never become bored when they are doing their work. Actually, doing variety of tasks not only makes workers more satisfied, but also increases productivity. To illustrate one only needs to refer to the number of companies providing variety in work environment in order to increase productivity. To demonstrate, most of the scientists all over the world contend that companies which provide their workers with different tasks have more productivity compared to the other companies. So, they establish an experimental program worldwide to examine the effect of providing different tasks for workers on companies’ productivity. The results are surprising: over 90 percent of companies providing different tasks for their workers have more productivity compared to others in view of the fact that their workers are more satisfied.
In approaching this issue apart from the fact mentioned above one should regard another subtle point meticulously that the workers who have different tasks to do during day work are happier in comparison with those who do the same thing. Noteworthy intelligible statistics, revealed by a social research conducted in our country, show that having different work during the day increase the sense of importance among workers. The research asserts that as a result of this sense of importance, the workers who have different tasks to do are happier. Moreover, this happiness raised by having different tasks during the workday can help to decrease the ascending rate of psychological problems. For example, severe, disabling mental illness has dramatically increased in the United States. A tally of those who are so disabled that they qualify for Supplemental Security income and Social Security Disability Insurance increase two and a half between 1987 and 2007, as it is summarized in The New York Time Book Review.
Taking all aforementioned arguments into account can lead us to the conclusion that workers are more satisfied when they have different tasks to do during the work day.
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Some believe that one should spend more time being far away from the people we care about because it is necessary for people to understand the importance of relationship of people we care about while others think being away from people we care about can 62
- You have long been friends with someone If they do something that you don t like should you still be friends with him or her 35
- TPO-23 - Integrated Writing Task Populations of the yellow cedar, a species of tree that is common in northwestern North America, have been steadily declining for more than a century now, since about 1880. Scientists have advanced several hypotheses expla 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...orker are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks during working hours or ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ferent tasks to do during the work day.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, apart from, for example, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39036144578 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92937728368 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515662650602 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2275070966 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.277777778 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0555555556 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401376657512 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143959859109 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112354788228 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299726194848 0.150856017488 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734598146924 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.