When thinking about the issue that it makes worker more satisfied when they have different types of tasks to do than when they were asked to do similar tasks all day during workday, different individuals will have different ideas. Some citizens claim that doing the same work will makes they more pleased because they can accumulate ample experience from doing a task long time and thus they can have a good performance on their future career. However, from where I stand, working on a single task for long time will only makes them suffer from tired and listless.
First and foremost, workers should do different works during workday to enhance their working efficiency. Owing to our physiology structure, we human beings cannot concentrate on a thing for a long time. According to scientist, our working and studying efficiency are highest at the first two hours that we do a project, and after that our attention will decrease drastically. Thus by doing different tasks we can maximize our working efficiency. Take my elder brother as an example. My elder brother is a general manager at a foreign enterprise. The secret of his success is that he will tackle various task everyday to fully express his potential. In this way, we need to tackle different mission everyday to optimize our efficiency.
Furthermore, there is not doubt that everyone will get bored and suffering when doing a single job all day. In this way, they may feel frustrated and even want to quit the job. For example, I will do some research in laboratory with my tutor, and when I extract protein from bacterials, I need to repeat a simple thing for all day, which makes me feel extremely tired and bored, and at that time I always considered to quit from that research project.
In a nutshell, the benefits of dealing with varied missions during workday outweigh much than tackling a single task all day. Not only can it improve workers' working efficiency, but also makes people feel released and pleased. As a result, I would definitely agree that employee should doing various tasks during work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...ens claim that doing the same work will makes they more pleased because they can accu...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ur attention will decrease drastically. Thus by doing different tasks we can maxim...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ttention will decrease drastically. Thus by doing different tasks we can maximize...
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Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ess is that he will tackle various task everyday to fully express his potential. In this...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ay, we need to tackle different mission everyday to optimize our efficiency. Furtherm...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considered quitting'.
Suggestion: considered quitting
...ed and bored, and at that time I always considered to quit from that research project. In a nut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88700564972 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52913061028 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4170037165 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.764705882 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368551624488 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114880204269 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135344842071 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231306525409 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139076643307 0.0645574589148 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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