Most of the people prefer to have an exciting life and will be boring when they have to do the same thing all the day. Hence, when they are doing their jobs or daily duties, they should consider this fact. For instance, in my view, workers will be more satisfied when they do a variety of duties during the workday. I will elaborate my opinion on the following reasons.
First and foremost, when workers have a lot of tasks to do, the working process will be extremely interesting and exciting for them. They will enjoy working, consequently, their efficiency will increase. On the other hand, when the workers do the same affair during the day, it will be boring for them and they will just concentrate on the end of the day and going home instead of concentrating on their job. Therefore, their output will extremely decrease and they may do not earn enough money.
Furthermore, workers that have a variety of tasks to do during the day can save time. Because they probably determine a specific time for doing each task, hence, they will do all of the tasks quickly. Consequently, they will optimize the time-consuming and will have enough time to do other things like spending time with their family or do entertainment. For instance, I finish all of them more quickly whenever I arrange my daily schedule with different duties rather than doing the same thing all the day.
Admittedly, doing a variety of tasks during the day will increase the self-confidence of the workers. Each worker has special skills and abilities hence, each one can do some affairs better than others. By doing a variety of things, they will be able to determine their talents. Consequently, their self-confidence will increase then, they will be satisfied with their jobs. For instance, when I was working in a lab for one year, I perceive that I can do some experiments more precisely than other students, hence, my confidence increased.
Due to the aforementioned grounds, I believe that workers will be more satisfied when they have a different variety of affairs for doing during a day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...or doing each task, hence, they will do all of the tasks quickly. Consequently, they will ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84593837535 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71072343878 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425770308123 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7995443829 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1111111111 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355616119357 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155836921105 0.076458572812 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891866557753 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2632774275 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521077527513 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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