Job satisfaction plays a pivotal role in individual's life. There are different standpoints regarding happiness at workplace. Some argues that workers are happier if they do similar task all over the day, while other hold the opposite idea that doing different task all over the day drives happiness. As per my perspective, the latter view carries more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily, repeating the same work will be tiring and boring compared to doing different task at the same time. Employees would be attentive and focused on their work by playing different roles at workplace. This will help them to increase their work efficiency and productivity. My own brother is a compelling example of this. He was working in a pharmaceutical company before 2 years where he used to handle accounts and billing stuff for all customers. After few months, he got frustrated with his daily routine same work task and resigned from the workplace. Afterwards, he found a job in another pharmaceutical company where he was expected to play different roles every day. Eventually, he started liking his new job position as he got a chance to prove himself in different roles. Thus, working on various role
Secondly, there is no doubt that workers could be able to develop great potential and unique skills after devoting themselves to single task in whole life. However, they may not get chance to connect with different people if they would have devoted their time concentrating only on single task. As a result, they might feel separate and alone from other co-workers. On the other side, workers, who involve in greater number of activities would be interacting with many other people which will help them create social connection with different employees. Thus, if they have their own people with whom they like to work, it would make workers to push themselves to work at their best level.
Furthermore, with the development of technology, world is transforming in very fast pace. Workers need to be updated with the new technology, and advancement to catch up with a new change and trend. If they do not participate in this change then they will be left behind and cannot survive in harsh competitions. Additionally, diversity in work would allow the employees to explore more in their fields as well as related area, and thereby, they will gain more knowledge with great experience. As a result, workers can easily achieve progress, which means increase their chance for job promotion.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that, working in various task everyday provides workers to face many challenges, so that would help them to push beyond their limits to acquire a best knowledge. Consequently, in such work environment, the pressure they deal will motivates them and the skill they develop benefits them to gain self-confidence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2406.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0866807611 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80185003338 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528541226216 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1633332075 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.24 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.92 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213190982639 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588747882189 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673034739549 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135194418132 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599387776297 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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