Personally, I believe that doing many different kinds of assignments would let workers feel more satisfied rathan than doing the same action over and over again. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, doing different kinds of tasks would let workers learn multiple skills and let them have the chance to combine these skills as a skill set. This skill set would let the workers have advanced ability to accomplish more difficult assignments, so they will look themselves more valuable and become more satisfied. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I was the intern in design indutry last summer and my work content was to design a new instrument for battery. This assignment needed a lot of brainstorm and had to do many small and different kinds of tasks. This job actually gave me confidency and made me feel valuable to myself.
Secondly, doing different kinds of tasks would increase communications between workers and let them have critical skill of communication. This abilitiy would let workers become more competetive and feel themselves valuable. For instance, workers
Thirdly, repeating doing the same thing would cause workers stopping thinking. This means that workers would not create anyhting new or innovative in the process of prodution and this would let workers recognize themselves as low-intelligent person. For example, if there is a worker who works in the design industry, he is assigned to do routines everyday. No matter how many years he works in this position, he would not create or design something new beacuse he has no chance to try it. This situation would continue until he really get a chance to work on his own design.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that multiple types of tasks would inspire workers and let them feel satisfied. This is because this way would let workers have skill set, improve communication skill, avoid workers stopping thinking.
- TPO 48 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 60
- TPO 43 Independent Writing TaskImagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion which of the following is the best thing to do Interrupt and correct the mistake right away Wai 70
- TPO 45 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives 68
- TPO 43 Independent Writing TaskImagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion which of the following is the best thing to do Interrupt and correct the mistake right away Wai 60
- TPO 41 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Personally, I believe that doing many different kinds of assignments would let workers ...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun brainstorm seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of brainstorms'.
Suggestion: a lot of brainstorms
...ent for battery. This assignment needed a lot of brainstorm and had to do many small and different ...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...emselves valuable. For instance, workers Thirdly, repeating doing the same thing ...
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Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...industry, he is assigned to do routines everyday. No matter how many years he works in t...
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Line 7, column 537, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...ituation would continue until he really get a chance to work on his own design. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05504587156 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69668942332 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504587155963 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7543538138 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2352941176 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177620808449 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697498086221 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596236939544 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124651369535 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389242385339 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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