As time passes and human beings become more developed, they become more aware of the significance of children's upbringing since they are the cornerstone of any successful community. With this in mind, given the fact that nowadays, parents have less time to spend with their offspring due to today's hectic lifestyle, some believe that it stands to reason that it is better for parents to play games in their leisure time with their children, while others think that parents are required to do issues which are about their children's schoolwork. I, personally, subscribe to the former attitude based on quite a few reason, three of the most substantial of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
The most compelling reason is that it is crystal clear that in today's modern world, everybody has to be in rush so as not to be left behind in contending for "the field of competition", and earning money has become more difficult. Hence, individuals need to work more and more to have a better financial situation, resulting to have less time to spend with their families. Playing with children gives parents a chance to improve their relationships with their children. Besides, it helps mankind to have great memories from their childhood. For instance, even though my parents were busy when I was a child, they often allocated a specific time during every week to play with me. So, now, I can recall all of those lovely time.
Another interpretation as to why I do not concur with the latter perspective in the introductory paragraph lies in the fact that playing benefits both parents and children, due to the fact that it assists them to be healthier. It is statistically proven that people who play games like soccer and basketball, are less afflicted diseases in comparison to those who do not. Moreover, it can be considered as an effective way to get rid of daily routine, which brings parents about peace of mind.
Last but not least, playing games help children to be more creative, which is one of the key factors of being successful. According to a research conducted in one of the most reputable universities in my country, the more creative one is, the more prosperous he or she is, which indicates the importance of creativity in people's prosperous. For instance, children learn through playing cheese to use their imagination to find ways to win, which improves their creativity.
In summary, having considered all the aforementioned arguments discussed above, I firmly endorse my view that the merits of playing with children outweigh those of doing things related to children's school works on the grounds that not only does it help both parents and children to be healthier, but also it gives them a chance to be more creative, which paves the way for children to be successful in the future that brings them bout happiness. In addition, by so doing, parents can have a better relationship with their parents.
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Line 1, column 609, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'few reasons'.
Suggestion: few reasons
...to the former attitude based on quite a few reason, three of the most substantial of which...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in summary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.199637023593 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.176043557169 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0852994555354 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0508166969147 0.046263068375 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0671506352087 0.0685040099705 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137931034483 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0453720508167 0.0351676179071 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8039594087 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0526315789474 0.0309702414327 170% => OK
Particles: 0.00181488203267 0.00188951952338 96% => OK
Determiners: 0.0744101633394 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.005444646098 0.0209618222197 26% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.021778584392 0.0139019557991 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2934.0 2387.08602151 123% => OK
No of words: 494.0 408.028673835 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93927125506 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338056680162 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246963562753 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188259109312 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145748987854 0.112833075102 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8039594087 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506072874494 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 59.5338185912 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0588235294 20.5533526081 141% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.8064216336 48.84282405 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.588235294 120.699889404 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0588235294 20.5533526081 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.644075263715 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 53.7551798047 45.7405998639 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.3024691358 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486060647572 0.300154397459 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101291152612 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0699609129609 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.527706967065 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179289029314 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184957808054 0.114077575197 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882343356148 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.399147430797 0.336927656856 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0621851244823 0.067059652881 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330272219869 0.210909579961 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665484027668 0.0618886996521 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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