The independence of youngsters are now a public concern. Some people believes that young people are more independent than before while some people argues that they still depend too much on their parents when making decisions. From my standpoint, I agree with the former that the young generations are more independent to make their own decisons than in the past, based on several reasons below.
To begin with, with the development of modern technology, especially the Internet, youngsters tend to look for infromation and advice through the webpages when they are in dilemmas of making decisions. They could gain an easy access to the whole world by using the Internet and search in Google and other search engines for whatever they want. If they can not find a satisfying answer for their problems, there is another kind of website wating for them, Quora. They may write down their dilemmas on Quora and stick tags from various topics based on the types and contents of their problem. Also, they could even invite professionals on each topic of Quora to answer their questions and it is totally free of charge. This is indeed a reliable method to get out of the dilemma of making decisions so that an increasingly number of young people began to use this way to solve their problems. In other words, thay are more likely to make their own decisons with the assistence of some websites rather than looking for help of their parents.
In addition, nowadays younsters can obtain more education than before. In the past, a large portion of young people may drop out from schools in an very early age. Then they might lack sufficient knowledge and experience to make decisions by themselves and were more willing to ask their parents for help. By contrast, young people in this modern era can receive more education so that they have sufficient knowledge and solid skills to make choice by themselves. Also, they may look for suggestions from their teachers and classmates. In this way, they may not depend on their parents frequently as before.
Admittedly, advice from parents who are more experienced than us is also helpful, especially when we are too young to make reasonable decisons. We may follow their suggestions sometimes. However, we could not totally depend on them because their experience may be out of date and they are not always right. Therefore, most youngsters including my friends and classmates are trying to be able to make decisions by themselves.
Judging from all the situations and examples mentioned above, we might easily find that the young generations today have better abilities to make their own decisions than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...as of making decisions. They could gain an easy access to the whole world by using the Interne...
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Line 3, column 805, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('increasingly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('number') instead of another adjective.
...the dilemma of making decisions so that an increasingly number of young people began to use this way t...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... can obtain more education than before. In the past, a large portion of young peop...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ung people may drop out from schools in an very early age. Then they might lack su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, therefore, while, in addition, kind of, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2216.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9797752809 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56755709787 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485393258427 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8757631508 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.523809524 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1904761905 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386259040504 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119380781205 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720096467918 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241781831807 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552822603094 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.