News have been one of the big concerns for humankind. Some people prefer to know every thing in the world. On the other hand, some people are sensitive by news. In my view, being aware of events in the world is a positive experience.
First of all, people can learn by news. Knowing about events can improve people's knowledge. Knowing more and more is one of the big advantages of paying attention to news. Some people prefer to read newspaper and some of them prefer to hearing news in the radio or TV. No matter which way they want, it is a kind of education for them. Every day people can see lot of changes across the world. There are some bad news and some good news. I recently read an essay in one the top newspapers in my home country, Iran. That topic was about effect of news on human. The author mentioned that most of news are negative, but they have some positive effect on humans. For example, when a young student is reading about uneducated parents in some countries across the world, she/he would be more satisfied with her/his parents. This satisfaction is that positive effect. People learn to be thankful by their life when they read bad news about other people in other spots in the world.
Second of all, people can help each other by knowing about news in other regions. For example, my father has looked up for a volunteer work after his retirement. He heard about some students in the rural part of our city, who have no money to pay for education. He decided to flight to one of those regions and stay with them and teach them to learn how to read passages in Persian. He did a great job in that area and after one year a journalist took a video of them and showed it in the TV. As a matter of fact, people was impressed by his job and they decided to help them in variety of ways.
To sum up, people are different, but most of them want to know about new, because it is a kind of nice to learn by other's life or help other people around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hear'?
Suggestion: hear
...ad newspaper and some of them prefer to hearing news in the radio or TV. No matter whic...
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Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... learn how to read passages in Persian. He did a great job in that area and after ...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...ecause it is a kind of nice to learn by others life or help other people around the wo...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'kind of', 'as a matter of fact', 'first of all', 'in my view', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244552058111 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.145278450363 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0774818401937 0.0866891130778 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.00968523002421 0.046263068375 21% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0605326876513 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.157384987893 0.118717715034 133% => OK
Participles: 0.0242130750605 0.0351676179071 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.15829565991 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0338983050847 0.0309702414327 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00484261501211 0.00188951952338 256% => OK
Determiners: 0.10411622276 0.0887237588012 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121065375303 0.0209618222197 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0121065375303 0.0139019557991 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1982.0 2387.08602151 83% => OK
No of words: 374.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29946524064 5.86048508987 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.243315508021 0.338922669872 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.141711229947 0.251872472559 56% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0935828877005 0.174417080927 54% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0561497326203 0.112833075102 50% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.15829565991 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465240641711 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.7683283895 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5833333333 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1625759746 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5833333333 120.699889404 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.541666666667 0.644075263715 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 29.754456328 45.7405998639 65% => OK
Elegance: 1.97752808989 1.45489161554 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1967917832 0.300154397459 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100177560214 0.103427244359 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103339759621 0.0752933317313 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.432636268357 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17434179559 0.151897553556 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765849872165 0.114077575197 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507685548964 0.0781384742642 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.458429158904 0.336927656856 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10256454054 0.067059652881 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165542713708 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487726651443 0.0618886996521 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.