Many people think that they should follow all the news and be aware of any event that happens around the world, even if it is not related to their daily life. However, others believe that it is not necessary to know every event because they will not be useful for them or even can be harmful. In my opinion, following all the news and events from all over the world is wasting time because we should concentrate on our lives and goals.
Knowing every event can hurt our mind and body. Every day in the world a lot of events happen that most of them are painful and bad news; following all of them would make us feel upset and anxious. If we every day listen to the world news or read many newspapers, then we probably feel that this world is full of anger, impoverished, war, illness and many bad things. Gradually this makes us depressed and this can hurt our mind and consequently will threat our health. For example, whenever I follow the news of Syria, then I feel upset because I cannot do anything for that innocent people. One of our duties in this world is living happily and finding happiness, for this purpose we should allude to bad news.
Second, in my opinion, knowing every news that is not related to our life is wasting time. We should specify a goal for our life and concentrate on it by doing everything that is necessary for obtaining that goal. For instance, scientists that are one of the successful people in the world, do not waste their time by following every event that happens around the world; instead, they just focus on their field's news. Hence, every person that wants to have a prosperous future, should concentrate on his or her own field and do not pay attention to other events.
Third, knowing every news around the world is one of the newsmen and reporters duty, not us. If our field is not related to the news report or we do not work in a news network, it is not necessary for us to be aware of any incident around the world. Many newspapers or news networks for earning more money, collect all the events and accidents from all over the world which most of them are not really important; even some of them are fictitious. Hence, we should not follow all of them.
All in all, following all the news from all over the world, is not necessary for us because most of them are gloomy news and make us feel bad. We should not waste our time by following all the news. Finally, we are not a reporter, therefore this is a bad idea to follow and trust all of the news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: NOT_US1[1]
Message: Did you mean 'use'?
Suggestion: use
... of the newsmen and reporters duty, not us. If our field is not related to the new...
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Line 10, column 281, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... this is a bad idea to follow and trust all of the news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, hence, however, if, really, second, so, then, therefore, third, even so, for example, for instance, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39699570815 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23085674208 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.381974248927 0.524837075471 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9320782572 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.45 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160395971451 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070131272055 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540366108414 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119358267171 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579821773972 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.