Although some people believe that it is useless to be cognizant about the events
happening around the globe, I think it is instrumental to know about worldly affairs
even if they are least likely to influence our life. I would like to throw light on my opinion
in the following essay:
To begin with, we live in a modern contemporary world where it is integral to know
the world outside our home, because it affects out life directly or indirectly affects our life.
It is well know fact that we live in revolutionized world where this planet became one village due to
interdependence between countries. Thus, collapse of economy of even one country produces great impact
on others. For instance, when the state of Florida was devastated by the high rate hurricane, resulted
into rise in petroleum and gas prices almost many parts of the country and even to other neighboring
countries. In this case, people who live hand to mouth might suffer from natural disaster. However,
people who are critically mentally ill might exacerbate their illness when exposed to sad news. Therefore,
elders and psychologically unstable people should be refrained from this aguish.
Another reason that deserves attention is knowledge about outside might save someone's life.
Indeed social media serves as source of information to disperse news almost every part of
the world. Knowledge about the prediction of weather might act as blessing in disguise for
the people in emergency situation. For instance, earthquake was predicted in the region of
Pakistan and Nepal before it happened. Evacuation news became viral in second and large number of
people vacated their homes to protect themselves. Although damage to properties was tremendous, but
information about safety saved life of thousands of people. After hearing this news, many philanthropic across
the time zone congregated to rescue people from danger.
To sum up, information about events might come with concrete benefits for individuals to become alert for the forecasted
future events and to prepare us to react to the natural calamities.
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...ess when exposed to sad news. Therefore, elders and psychologically unstable peop...
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...duals to become alert for the forecasted future events and to prepare us to react...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33234421365 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73889330038 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611275964392 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5011904627 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.3125 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.53405017921 507% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169070854855 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476001170839 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636221355879 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467721520828 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504590889116 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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