TPO 48- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Today’s lives are not as simple as the past. Living in modern societies has became a complicated issue providing scientists a matter of debating. While some peoples hold this opinion that such evolving issue that peoples behave intuitive in this cases; the others put emphasize on Necessity of planning and organizing abilities for youth. I, personally, agree with latter statement and elaborate on my viewpoint as follow.
First and formost, everyday new challenges, difficulties and unexpected subjects arise from modern societies. Obviously, to tackle this problematic sides of life it’s no way better than managing and controlling our time, energy and even relationships. Therefore, this demands for a well-developed and high-degree of planning and organizing skills for every citizen.
Second, Specificly; for yonger peoples, it gets more importance. Take the issues of social interactions as an example. Complexity of how to deal different personalites, how to made best decisions, how the honest friend is look like, or when is the right time to make actions could confuse even the adults. This might get in trouble not only youngers, but also each un-educated person. Accordingly, this part of society, for less experience, have to equipped with relevant education and training on how to overcome unknown problems.
Third, abilities like as planning and organizing can lead the peoples to managing other facets of their lives. It is not negative and stressful aspcts of life which require to be managed and scheduled. Issues like as happy times or detrmining events like as choicing partners or schools possess the importance of having these crucial talents.
In sum, managerial abilities, as a supportive tool are needed in all over the lifetime, as much as springtime. Although, yougth illustrates a period to having that. More, other part of life can benefit from potentially and call for planning powers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...he past. Living in modern societies has became a complicated issue providing scientist...
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Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... issue that peoples behave intuitive in this cases; the others put emphasize on Nece...
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Line 1, column 418, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...statement and elaborate on my viewpoint as follow. First and formost, everyday new chall...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er the lifetime, as much as springtime. Although, yougth illustrates a period to having ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, look, second, so, therefore, third, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40728476821 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95451276042 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662251655629 0.524837075471 126% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.50401587 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7222222222 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195700314847 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515920949978 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470523298604 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987435344936 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379846714073 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.