Most people prefer to make new friends in order to find happiness and new experiences in a social environment. However, in my opinion, I disagree with this decision, because I prefer to maintain my old friends even though when they are part of a very small group for the next reasons.
Firstly, I think that making many new friends as a needing sometimes could have some disadvantages, those people do not know you very well, they do not care what your interests are or even your familiar situation, whatever. For example, imagine you are going to the college, you are a freshman; you do not know anyone on campus, and for any reason, you need to share your time with others. Therefore, you can have a meeting with other students, introducing yourself, talking with them what you like, etc. However, you cannot say those people will be confident with you because it is too soon to trust in them. Even though, it is very important to wait a little more time, until you could identify each person and therefore, determinate who of them will be your real friend.
Secondly, maintaining your friendship with a small group for a long time could be better, because you can spend your time with them, share your opinions, what things you like, as a result of this, you are maybe creating a solid relationship with those who really care for you. Another example, imagine you have a familiar trouble and you have to share your situation with someone, there is no better to have an old friend who really cares for you and talk about your experience with him or her.
Additionally, most people, not in my case, have the ability to make new friends, and they can be part of a solid friendship. However, according to the behavior of each person, and how this measures its plans with those friends, it could be produced a real happiness, a strong social environment and this is very valuable.
Finally, I can mention that I am a person very shy and I am not very sociable. In addition, I consider that maintaining my very small group of friends for a long time, could bring happiness to me. Moreover, this theory could have many variations, and this opinion depend of everyone, in order to understand what other people need to be happy. Think about it...
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6608040201 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52808896347 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464824120603 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3729286007 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5333333333 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 5.45110844103 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296330944729 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109197918508 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638025510894 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167651583757 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548379444436 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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