TPO2 Independent Writing Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that always telling the truth is not necessary to consider in any relationship between people because sometimes truth can be misunderstood by some people and that makes them afraid of telling the truth. However, in my opinion, I believe that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship for the following three reasons.
The first reason is, telling the truth is a behavior of honesty. In any relationship between people they have to be honest with each other. Honesty is the base of any relation. If they are not telling the truth then they are not honest to each other and their relation might not go well at the end. For example, if two businessmen are working as partners they have to be honest to each other so that they both can be profited in business. In contrast, if they are not honest with each other then lying to each other can lead to rivalry between them and that can also effect their business.
Second of all, in point of religious view, lying is considered as the most heinous crime in almost every religion in the world. Not telling the truth is considered to be a sin. For instance, in Islam telling the truth is always encouraged and lying to anyone is forbidden. Lying is considered to be the root of other crimes. So whenever you are not telling the truth you are increasing your sins.
Finally, people have to lie ten time more just to hide one truth. And at they end they always gets caught up that the were lying. When other people finds out that they were being lied to then it angers them. It often leads to breakup of the relationship. For instance, when you lie about having a bad habit to your girlfriend that she does not like then continuing that habit would be hard without telling her any lie. And when she finally finds out that habit she ultimately breaks up with you. However, if you told the truth at the beginning then there would not be this much waste of time. I prefer to know the truth no matter what, even if that might hurt a lot. Couse now or then the truth always comes out.
In conclusion, I consider always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship because of the above three reasons.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 485, Rule ID: OTHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'other than'?
Suggestion: other than
...trast, if they are not honest with each other then lying to each other can lead to rivalry...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 491, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
... if they are not honest with each other then lying to each other can lead to rivalry...
^^^^
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sidered to be the root of other crimes. So whenever you are not telling the truth you are i...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
... one truth. And at they end they always gets caught up that the were lying. When oth...
^^^^
Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ays gets caught up that the were lying. When other people finds out that they were b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53980099502 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40870147095 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430348258706 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8418890619 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.347826087 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4782608696 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52173913043 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264134408867 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921012719262 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802699123402 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193457882274 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862206071685 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 485, Rule ID: OTHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'other than'?
Suggestion: other than
...trast, if they are not honest with each other then lying to each other can lead to rivalry...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 491, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
... if they are not honest with each other then lying to each other can lead to rivalry...
^^^^
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sidered to be the root of other crimes. So whenever you are not telling the truth you are i...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
... one truth. And at they end they always gets caught up that the were lying. When oth...
^^^^
Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ays gets caught up that the were lying. When other people finds out that they were b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53980099502 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40870147095 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430348258706 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8418890619 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.347826087 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4782608696 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52173913043 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264134408867 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921012719262 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802699123402 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193457882274 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862206071685 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.