TPO23- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, success is what everyone is trying to achieve. Somebody prefers to work quickly and accept if they make mistakes while others choose to work slowly and surely. Personally, I prefer the second way and believe that calm and confident working is the greatest option for people. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, calm and confident working gives any individual the chance to think and decide what to do for its next step in life. This is necessary in this chaotic world that people can make decisions to find what they are interested in and gain knowledge and experience about it. Moreover, by this, they can walk through the path that gets them to their goals. So, they can achieve prosperity in the future. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, I had a critical problem with my colleagues in my job. It was very controversial and I made many discussions with my colleague and my boss and finally, I preferred to get out of the office and find a better job. Hence, I decided to stop and slow down my working and after two months I found a favorite job for myself.
Secondly, somebody who is working rapidly and quickly and always making risks may lose his concentration. He may not pay enough attention to some aspects of what he does and always there are some dark points in his life. As a result, he can’t be as much successful in his job and entire life. For instance, in my last example, I encountered that problem from my colleague against myself and that made me very sad and angry. I tried to be calm, think about myself, my capabilities, and achieve my self-confidence. If I had reacted rapidly and had gotten out of work quickly, I would have lost the chance to gain more experience and knowledge to change my job.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that doing works slowly and being sure about the future is the significant key to achieving success. This is because this gives you the chance to think and make an appropriate decision and on the other hand, you have the time to concentrate and see all aspects of what you do.
- TPO 24 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part time job Use specific reasons and examples 60
- TPO23 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In today s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct Use specific reasons and examples to support your answe 70
- TPO 49 Task1 80
- TPo33 Integrated Task 70
- TPO31 Integrated Task 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54805194805 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58157515384 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3297398835 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.55 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166635574145 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517115352479 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632658295538 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119181765325 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444106719368 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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