Today's world has been associated with the tremendous and fast-paste developments which bring up a critical and controversial question mark whether the accuracy should get sacrificed to the speed. By the time, there are the plethora of objections to acknowledge working fast and take risky mistakes as a genuine and concrete solution for harmonizing in this chaotic world. Admittedly, I believe we should assure that everything is correct in advance and each step ought to get calculated. Through ensuing paragraphs, the rationale behind this opinion will be elaborate.
First and for the most, the inattentive decisions in our work would cost profound fiascos which might exterminate our whole life and annihilate all we have done later. As the matter of fact, the heedless gambling with the life has vigorous detrimental outcomes in this fast-paste life. For the illustration, imagine that you are the sale representative of a company and need to buy the essentials of other departments. Practically, there are many online frauds and schemes for the negligent individuals who don't perceive the trickery behind the deceptive advertisements which manipulate them to purchase their products. Your precipitance will enable them to coax simply, and it is not far-fetched you will be trapped into those defrauder's maneuver to empty the company's pocket. We require a mindful observation through whatever we are about to participate in, either a simple purchase or start a business and so forth.
Moreover, no one can cast a shadow toward the fact that the nowadays rivals are very acknowledged and adroit in various fields and by our irrational movements we will be altered by them immediately. Frankly, your efforts will be invaded literally hip and tight!. For instance, I decided to work as a dental office manager just one month after moving to united states. It was a prompt and risky decision with no evaluation about the real vicissitudes and the rudimentary necessities about health care system in this country. However, I got the job in a way too sophisticated orthodontic dental office after a couple of attempts and I assumed that I was growing fast. Gradually the resentments had been arisen by the clients because I was careless about fundamentals like the importance of customer service or the basics about the insurances. In fact, the discontents compelled me to dedicate my resignation letter before getting fired!. The fact is this new era doesn't have that much reliance on the good fortune but the attentive decisions!.
In brief, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that the absent-minded and abrupt decision-making approach in our work is a pernicious and incongruous adjustment in the rapid-past developmental society and you will confront massive amount of failures in the long term since there are interminable line of the informed competitors who can get your place in various positions and the fraudulent who have ambushed to plunder all your efforts. I recommend to take our time properly and assure of every single step before the action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 507, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hemes for the negligent individuals who dont perceive the trickery behind the decept...
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Line 3, column 961, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...etting fired!. The fact is this new era doesnt have that much reliance on the good for...
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Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ut the attentive decisions!. In brief, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the c...
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Line 4, column 464, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend taking'.
Suggestion: recommend taking
...ambushed to plunder all your efforts. I recommend to take our time properly and assure of every s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, frankly, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in brief, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2589.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19879518072 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03316094554 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 212.727598566 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586345381526 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 828.0 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.03608764 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.45 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0837644985173 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0207789025246 0.076458572812 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322031958706 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0539314378053 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376111277532 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 86.8835125448 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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