Without a shadow of a doubt, government investment plays a pivotal role in economic development. A glance at people's attitude towards government investment choice brings to a light question that has been asked several times, namely, whether to spend money to improve Internet access or invest in transportation construction. Were I forced to choose, I would prefer the latter point of view to the former one and I will elaborate on what rationale my perspective is based on in the following paragraphs.
The first reason worth mentioning is that investments in public transportation contribute to developing the local economy. The example of Chinese Railway Highspeed can vividly illustrate this phenomenon. In recent decades, the Chinese government determined to start a revolution in the railway system, not only to design multiple types of high-speed trains but also to construct the high-speed railway system across the territory. More than one hundred trillion Yuan was invested in the last 15 years and the railway network which contains thousand of cities has been completed, which allows people to travel from the brink of the land to the inner part of the country within 10 hours. Zhengzhou, a center of the Chinese high-speed railway network, benefits both from freight revenue and tourism revenue, has become one of the most potential cities in China.
Moreover, another significant reason to improve public transportation is it can improve the life quality of people. To illustrate more, the construction of public transportation is composed of road construction and the investment in transportation vehicles. Orchestrated road systems can save the time people spend on the road, at the same time, more transportation choices provide citizens with distinctive cheaper ways to go to their destinations. Besides, the progress of applying new clean energy public vehicles gradually reduces the pollution caused by the emissions of vehicle gas which will influence either the weather quality or the public health. Had it not been for investing in public transportation, these achievements could never be accomplished.
A voice arises that spending money to improve Internet access can effectively improve the work efficiency for its higher transfer speed, while this claim needs to be scrutinized meticulously. Admittedly, advanced Internet access enables people to accomplish more complicated work, however, other factors that will affect the work may be ignored. If people are stuck on the highway for several hours, they cannot dedicate themselves to working regardless of how quick their Internet access is. And the dissatisfaction can further exert a negative influence on their mental health.
In conclusion, drawing upon the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly hold the opinion that the investment in public transportation is more necessary. While there are one thousand Hamlets in one thousand people's eyes, I firmly believe they will yield after being shown to my article.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 540, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
... and the railway network which contains thousand of cities has been completed, which all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2535.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43991416309 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02341324472 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575107296137 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2687243819 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.421052632 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5263157895 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231971568275 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692907067043 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623281062299 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120244034989 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509498578678 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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