There is no shortage of opinion on the most optimal way to rewind and release stress after long hectic days. Although many extroverts would choose to go out with their friends or family to have fun and escape the daily pressure, I think we make the most use of our relaxing time by being on our own.
I believe it is precious to have time just for myself. In fact, we already spend most of our time every day being surrounded by other people, either at home, at school, at work or in public places. It is true that socializing is a crucial part of human life in order to keep moving, but it does take lots of energy and effort to maintain interaction, which can be exhausting, especially if we are not into talking to people. That is not to mention the feeling of being judged and poorly influenced when being with other people can cause several mental illnesses such as social anxiety and depression. As socializing gives us social rewards, it can also become a main stressor in our life.
On the other hand, it is clear that spending more time on our own is the way we try to balance between social and private life. When we are alone, there is no need to please other people, put up with things we don’t enjoy doing or even pretend to be someone else that contradicts our true selves. When we are on our own, we are the one to decide what we want to do, and thus can enjoy our precious happy time to the fullest. For example, I’m always afraid of my friends and family judging me for writing poems as they think it is a weird hobby, so I would never bring up that topic whenever they are around. However, I still go to a coffee shop alone and compose poems every once in a while, which always gives me the most peaceful moments when I’m living my true self. Those truly relaxing moments could not be made possible if I didn't choose to spare some time on my own.
In addition, the fact that going solo offers a number of mental benefits makes it the best way one can rest and get revitalized. One of those benefits includes increasing the understanding of ourselves. Unlike when we are together with other people, we are able to think more about ourselves when we are alone as there is no connection distracting our thoughts. As we talk to ourselves, we can hear our voice only and thus be able to focus on understanding our feelings, hopes and experiences. Not only do we get to know ourselves better and realize what our heart desires, but we can also find out solutions to the problems we are encountering in daily life. As a result, the more time is spent on reflecting, the happier our life becomes.
In conclusion, our modern life is getting more and more complicated every day, and being with others may be not the best way to having true relaxing moments. Instead, few hours of solitude can be what we need the most for a clear and healthy mind.
- TPO13 integrated writing task 90
- Tala Yasinpoor TPO 50 Writing Practice mode Back Continue Integrated Writing 00 05 Time Scientists are considering the possibility of sending humans to Mars in the coming decades Although there have been successful manned missions to the Moon in the 1960s 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 78
- Independent Writing Task Some parent offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think this is a good idea Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- TPO 62 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement After completing high school students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they begin studying at a university Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 832, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...moments could not be made possible if I didnt choose to spare some time on my own. ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, thus, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2342.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4022556391 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37083955763 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484962406015 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 745.2 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1353404574 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.523809524 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7619047619 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117383236989 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424027901156 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352322413964 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791166362487 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246100304321 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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