Traveling alone or in groups
We are living at an era when the young generations are liable to enjoy periodic vocations to invigorate their spirits after tedious loads of work. When it comes to choosing travelling alone or in groups, to some extent, probably the decision is contingent on one's character. Nevertheless, from my preference, traveling in groups is a better option from the side of security and the side of finance to the side of pleasure.
Primarily, though we all aspire to release tensions and seek for pleasure in a trip, when we practically make schedules, security invariably stands as the most significant factor to consider. Whatever cities or counties we are about to visit, even the place entitled to be the most organized one, risks and riots loom. Paying a visit to an unfamiliar country alone has considerably increased the possibility that we entrap ourselves with insidious hazards for one will get conspicuous and easily identified if he is isolated from throngs, not to mention the terrible situation that no acquainted one can rescue him instantly. Taking a colleague of mine who went to Hangzhou alone as an example, she was greatly at loose ends when a hideous robber threatened her to give all of her money, eventually she became deranged and flustered when hearing anything about trips or Hangzhou, needless to say, that horrible encounter must exert irresistibly negative effects in her whole life. Conversely, this kind of concerns can be alleviated if we are stuck to our companions, it's indisputable that without a robber dares to challenge and confront with a group of people, isn't it?
Furthermore, travelling in groups will definitely counteract part of financial burdens foisted on us in a trip. The power of an agglomeration of travelling partners will be witnessed evidently when hailing a cab, booking a hotel, reserving a meal, or even purchasing local specialties. Afterall, no merchants would refuse to give a slight discount on a group of people, besides that, when some fixed expenses are allocated to several people equally, the pressure could be lessoned anyway.
In the third place, encounters with embarrassments are put in our way. Imaging how drab and void it would be if we can't share our exultant emotions instantly with others and get feedbacks? Or how pitiful it is when you are touched greatly by a marvelous landscape but can't have a photo with the assist of your companion? It is partly due to these intimate and warm contacts with our friends that we can ultimately be vigorous enough to brace ourselves for future plights.
Concerning all the factors mentioned above, merits encompassed within traveling in groups enable us to amplify the pleasure, lesson the financial burden, and protect the bodies. Security must take precedence over all other things, everyone must bear in mind that and chew the cud before planning for a journey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to travel'.
Suggestion: to travel
...oads of work. When it comes to choosing travelling alone or in groups, to some extent, pro...
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, to some extent, probably the decision is contingent on ones character. Neverth...
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Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...though we all aspire to release tensions and seek for pleasure in a trip, when we...
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Line 2, column 583, Rule ID: NOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... to mention the terrible situation that no acquainted one can rescue him instantly...
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Line 2, column 1164, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ge and confront with a group of people, isnt it? Furthermore, travelling in groups ...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: AFTERALL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'after all'?
Suggestion: After all
..., or even purchasing local specialties. Afterall, no merchants would refuse to give a sl...
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Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ing how drab and void it would be if we cant share our exultant emotions instantly w...
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Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ed greatly by a marvelous landscape but cant have a photo with the assist of your co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, conversely, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, third, kind of, in the third place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06105263158 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86028028768 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604210526316 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 763.2 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0241154064 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.411764706 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9411764706 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201002189586 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612504541593 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747335473753 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117211843415 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774664682293 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 86.8835125448 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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