Music and art are the common features of human life, which are not restricted to any times or any places, they sound like a gift that is attributed among people to learn or enjoy it. Since there is no denying to this fact that children are better and faster learners, schools should consider the significant role of art and music in children life and prevent underestimating their plus points. As far as I am concerned, art and music might contribute to children's personality, also aid them to determine their potential talents. What fallows will shed more light on my points.
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