Qualities of a person defines him/her. It helps us know whether a person is good or bad. A good son or daughter should have many good qualities, it is not easy to enlist them. Moreover, I believe that qualities have remain same as it was in the past in the culture. Some of the features are very important that a son or daughter must posses, which I am going discuss in following essay.
First and foremost, children should be honest to their parents. It is very necessary for a person to have this quality. As it helps in life to maintain good relations with others personally as well as professionally. I would like to share my personal experience. During initial days of dating, there was a situation when I have to go to my colleague's farewell party on the day when we were suppose to go to our fourth date. I forgot to mention about the party that was important to attend. Instead, of lying him I honestly told him about it and postponed our date to the next weekend. He was so impressed by this that he proposed me for the marriage, now, we are happily married.The teaching of my parents helped me to find a good soulmate. It can be said that honesty is the base of all relations.
Besides this, kids should be obedient to the parents. Children do not have knowledge about right and wrong. Parents are wise and know many things from their experience, so they help their kids in taking many important decisions of life. After high school I was not certain which major I should take in the college, but my parents know me well and they helped in choosing the my main subjects. I am very thankful to them for giving a very good advice at the time of need. We should not ignore the advice given by the parents.
Lastly, we should have trust on parents. Trust makes strong relationship of parents and children. Sometimes it happens that decision of the parents seems nebulous, but if we trust them the end result is most of the time good for us. We should trust them with advice they are giving, because again the reason is they are wise and have good experience of life. Additionally, it can be said that the qualities which are considered as important are same as it was in the past.
To sum up, to be a good son or daughter one should have myriad number of qualities, but the characteristics which I mentioned above are very important to inculcate in lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...Moreover, I believe that qualities have remain same as it was in the past in the cultu...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
... farewell party on the day when we were suppose to go to our fourth date. I forgot to m...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...e marriage, now, we are happily married.The teaching of my parents helped me to fin...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...now me well and they helped in choosing the my main subjects. I am very thankful to th...
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'very good advice'.
Suggestion: very good advice
.... I am very thankful to them for giving a very good advice at the time of need. We should not igno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, honestly, if, lastly, moreover, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47004608295 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54207098886 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463133640553 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3007442946 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6153846154 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203271788867 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594216216566 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671628978506 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144456472135 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101798627927 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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