When it comes to the issue of the most important characteristic for a good co-worker, it is quite normal people have various opinions about it. The most answer would include being helpful, supportive, advocate you, have a sense of humor, etc. As far as I am concerned, if we want to be successful in our workplace we need to look at our colleagues as friends. So, I inclined to believe that they should be trusty, helpful, and sociable. Following, I try to explain my position clearly.
First, the common feature that most people think about it is loyalty. The final personality you should consider is trusty. I think that there is not disgusting feel when you work with a nosey person. I think that a small example may give some light to this point. When I had studied at the university, I had to work in the library for a while. At that, my co-worker was an American blond girl. One day when I came back from the class, I noticed someone opened my private letters which were from my girlfriend. My friend found out all of my secrets because no one had taught loyalty to him.
Second, we are living in a fast-changed world and we have to adapt ourselves to new situations. You can not find someone who is a master in all areas. So, we can better do our duties when we are working in a supportive atmosphere. Young employees would use their elderly co-workers' experience. On the other hand, young workers can assist others to work with new technologies like computers, data projectors, or even social networks.
Third, we all accepted that we have to work late because of the modern lifestyle, which coerces us to make more money. In this situation, a pleasant person always tries to turn a serious situation into a positive one. Because of his sense of humor, we would be more relaxed and feel tiring less often than we used to.
Summing up, I admit that everyone can mention different answers to this hotly-debated question. However, According to my experience and observation, we need those reliable, supportive and sociable to work together. Last but not least, I hope that the next generations being more responsible to foster their ethical principles.
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- It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community Do you support or oppose this plan Why Use specific reasons and details in your answer 81
- When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 40
- Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition. 16
- The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that they have more leisure time. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...try to explain each of them clearly. first, in gloomy and dark days having someone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6880733945 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60991930479 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60244648318 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.086158827 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.65 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0309894267554 0.236089414692 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00934928470411 0.076458572812 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287191786157 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0157615495242 0.150856017488 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227295555651 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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