Which of the following activities do you think will be the most beneficial to the environment? (1) Commute by biking or walking (2) Recycling (3) Eating a vegan diet
The importance of protecting the environment has become a widely discussed topic in society. In order to conserve the environment’s most precious resources, people have committed to various lifestyle changes, ranging from using more recyclable products to being more conscious of energy use. I strongly believe that eating a vegan diet is the most worthwhile activity when it comes to protecting the environment, since it reduces global warming, decreases greenhouse gas emissions, and allows for the expansion of forests.
To begin with, the elements of a plant-based diet require little to no factory use, which can cut back on global warming. By its nature, food production in factories negatively impacts the environment because it releases toxins, such as methane, into the atmosphere. As such, these chemicals negatively impact the environment by contributing to global warming. Through adhering to a vegan diet, however, toxic waste from factories would be reduced, resulting in a decrease of global warming.
Secondly, vegan diets can decrease greenhouse gas emissions because they eliminate the need for livestock rearing. For instance, non-vegan products such as meat, eggs, and milk all involve animal agriculture, releasing an increasing amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Further, feeding grain to animals, killing them for food, and later processing and storing their products results in higher electricity use. Consequently, a minimized demand for animal products can lead to fewer greenhouse gasses.
Finally, in addition to its ability to lessen directly harmful risks to the environment, a vegan diet can free up land used for agriculture. For example, a large amount of forests are cut down in order to grow crops for farm animals and supply land for pasture. However, the prevalence of vegan diets would eliminate the need for animal agriculture use, and allow for more forests and natural landscapes. Therefore, a higher amount of forests would aid in increasing oxygen levels and better air quality.
All in all, choosing to eat a vegan diet is the most beneficial lifestyle choice for the environment. Eliminating animal products from one’s diet would not only cut back on chemicals that negatively affect the environment, but it would also help provide more green space for our environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'would' requires base form of the verb: 'cut'
Suggestion: cut
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45179063361 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9041901913 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567493112948 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.412203685 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.411764706 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153038801753 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551898242713 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508016991582 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955492925172 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501095932264 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.