Without a shadow of a doubt, characters formed in childhood can exert a huge influence on channeling adults' mindsets. A glance at people's attitude towards values worth being taught in childhood brings to a light question that has been asked several times, namely, which is the most important value to share with a young child, being helpful, being honest or being well organized. Were I forced to choose, I would prefer the last choice to the previous ones and I will elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
The first reason worth mentioning is that being well organized can be an essential habit for us to improve efficiency. With regard to this hectic life, problems that we are facing are at scale and at street level, which means we have to make arrangements properly to solve them. Take the experience of Elon Musk, one of the famous businessmen in the world, as a compelling example. His family taught him methods to schedule his time at an early age, and this habit not only helped him fortify the knowledge he has learned but also engaged him in exploring multiple fields and developing different penchants. Even in his busy college life, he could bend on his study while devoting a lot of time to business. Being beneficial from his habit of well organized formed in his childhood, he can eventually achieve his dream of being a triumphant business leader in distinct fields.
Another significant reason for sharing this value is it can help us deal with different emergencies or problems. Upon the arrival of the technological era, though we have more access to gain information, we are exposed to abrupt different crises. To illustrate more, when we are in face of crisis, what we have to do is keep calm in order to not yield upon. However, calmness is a gift of endeavoring to learn how to be well organized rather than being honest or being helpful. With the help of this habit, we can unreel the complicated origins of the problems and come up with solutions ceaselessly, which can finally lead us to solve those difficulties.
A voice arises that being helpful or being honest is much more important than being well organized, while this claim should be scrutinized meticulously. Admittedly, being helpful and honest is an important virtue that can contribute to building solid friendship and forming a healthy social circle, it can not provide much help when we are urgent. In addition to that, the difficulty of forming a habit is increasing as the age marches on, which means childhood is the most precious time for parents to share the value of being well organized and help them form this habit. However, people can learn to be helpful or honest even in their adult by having more experience.
In conclusion, drawing upon the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly hold the opinion that being well organized is the most important value to share in childhood. While there are one hundred Hamlets in one thousand people's eyes, I firmly believe my opponents will yield after being shown to my article.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to read or watch the news presented by people whose views are similar to your own than by people whose views are different from yours 90
- Which one of the following do you think is the best way to get to know a city in a limited amount of time when you first visit it 1 touring historic sites 2 going to markets or shops 3 eating in restaurants or spending time in cafes 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives Use specific reasons and examples to su 88
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 15.1003584229 252% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2520.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64488283952 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509578544061 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 783.9 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5017582078 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468006896852 0.236089414692 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146817695134 0.076458572812 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14105194097 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296062080937 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099070399846 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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