Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, routines are played a vital role in each person’s live. Even the world has a routine cycle but it can be dangerous sometimes especially in the business life. Whereas some people believe that the routine is a good thing in the business, other consider that it kills creativity. From my vantage point, I concur with latter group. The lines above will shed light on my stand point.
First exquisite point to mention is importance of creativity. I have been working in company at reporting department for 5 years. there are many different kind of reports which teach different thing. Just because of these reports, I can read my company’s financial situation and analyze it. I would not know that much information, If I would not did these reports. Furthermore, having broad knowledge may open the gates of new jobs opportunities.
Secondly, in approaching this matter, apart from what mentioned above, there is another subtle point. doing similar tasks all day long is boring. this is not an ideal job type for me since I am an introvert person. I must do different types of tasks and discover new solution to each different problem. Thus I may be happy in my job. Being happy in the job is significant for me since it may affect my family relation. What’s more, According to a research which conducted at MIT University, job routine increases the risk of heart attack. it also affects our health.
To sum up, taking all aforementioned reasons into the account, one cannot deny the importance of doing different task during working day. On the one hand it makes you happy, on the other hand you can boost your creativity.
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... hand you can boost your creativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, apart from, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89824561404 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78923313539 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6316824974 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.4761904762 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160109839669 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473175586889 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933301182096 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915081038421 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677131178635 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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