workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long
Many factors affect the people's works especially some kinds of work in which workers are involved in this task full-time. For improving their qualification of works many people believe that they should do different tasks however other think that doing different works distract their attention from the main works. I subscribe to the idea that diversity is a beneficial parameter for improving workers satisfaction during their work time.
To begin with, repeating the same work in some frequent days conducive to tiredness of workers. They starts their works in the morning until night without any interrupt during it so they think that they just suffer severe works without any prosperous. Many researchers in Oxford University which conducted on workers who work in deep mines reveal that diversity is a main factor that increase people satisfaction during their work time. Considering the time of doing a consistent work, people need to do various work to have power for doing their central task.
Second, doing same works reduce people innovation power. Humans usually improve their brain performance when they challenge with some arduous problems. The more they use their creative power of themself the more achievement and prosperous they will have. for example, when a worker who work in a building do same work and just putting brick in different rows for making walls, he never change it because he accustomed to do a common work without innovation for designing the walls. However, when he has various responsibilities such as making walls, mixing mortar, making concrete or cutting beams or column profiles, the innovation power help him to do these works as well as possible. Scientists believe that humans who use their brain more, never confront to some disease such as insomnia or possible oldness so workers can prevent these disease just by do various tasks.
On the other hand, some of them are not accomplished in many works and just know limited tasks so the managers do not accept the risk of doing some major works by in-adept worker. For instance, doing electric works such as installing devices for controlling the electricity need a good experience related to electricity power since just a small faults conducive to inevitable disasters.
In conclusion, I totally believe that doing various works is more beneficial for workers than a monotonic work. This increase their satisfaction because not only they never feel tired but also their innovation power increase through different tasks.
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- people benefit more from travelling in their own country than from travelling to foreign countries 68
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
...conducive to tiredness of workers. They starts their works in the morning until night ...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ievement and prosperous they will have. for example, when a worker who work in a bu...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'changes'.
Suggestion: changes
...fferent rows for making walls, he never change it because he accustomed to do a common...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 835, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this disease' or 'these diseases'?
Suggestion: this disease; these diseases
...possible oldness so workers can prevent these disease just by do various tasks. On the other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20935960591 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6247896093 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492610837438 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2823368412 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.411764706 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8823529412 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269875135685 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107866331841 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572981194729 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173849916201 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337300119111 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.