Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that workers are more interested to do same types of works all time bcause it increases their specialized capabilities and efficiencies. However, I think that workers are enjoying to do different types of tasks than to do similar tasks in this 21st-century for the following reasons.
First of all, distinct types of works help people to get more experience, which is vital for future development. In today's world, employers always look for employee's versatile qualifications. Therefore, capability of doing varities of jobs makes one competent. For example, last year, I faced an interview in a renowned multinational company of our country. They asked about my job related experience and qualifications. As I had previous knowledge to work as a marketing manager, accountant, human resource manager in an organizations, where I did worked in different tasks in distinct departments in a day. They hired me. However, if I did not work in different departments at the same time, I could not gather huge knowledge and would not be competent for this job. For this reason, people now a days more enthusiastic to bring variations in their occupations.
Secondly, doing discrete types of duties in a single day aids people to release tension and makes them relaxed. Bcause people do both hard and easy tasks in a day. They need not to do take much pressure on difficult tasks for a whole day. For instance, my father worked as a cash officer in a bank. He had to do same tasks from morning to evening and felt tensions and anxiety in dealing with cash. In contrast, if he worked in the cash department for two hours, and then moved to human resource department, or marketing department, he might be felt more relaxed and peace. It is natural for humans doing repeated jobs make them exshausted and bored. Hence, it is an ideal decision to do rotated jobs in a day.
In conclusions, it can state that today's workers are more satisfied to do varieties of tasks in a day as it gives them more experience and makes psychologically and physically competent
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an organization' or simply 'organizations'?
Suggestion: an organization; organizations
..., accountant, human resource manager in an organizations, where I did worked in different tasks ...
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Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...anager in an organizations, where I did worked in different tasks in distinct departme...
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Line 3, column 794, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...t for this job. For this reason, people now a days more enthusiastic to bring variations i...
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Line 3, column 798, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...r this job. For this reason, people now a days more enthusiastic to bring variations i...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'do'?
Suggestion: do
... and easy tasks in a day. They need not to do take much pressure on difficult tasks f...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90056818182 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96988886377 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528409090909 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4540567286 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279678738553 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933197535653 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772991941992 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206024170575 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601226780541 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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