Nowadays, people are having specific tasks to do in their job places. In this regard, some individuals believe that workers who have many different types of tasks are more satisfied than doing similar tasks all day long, while others hold the opposite supposition. When it comes to me, I concur with the former group. In what follows, I will elaborate on my viewpoint with two specific reasons.
First of all, doing diverse types of tasks during the workday is not boring for workers, which helps them to be happy in their jobs. To be more specific, when workers do different tasks all day long, they face different challenges in every task. Every task has its own beneficial tips and contains diverse information, so workers should know and understand them in order to accomplish their jobs. These varieties in doing tasks make the workers' job more exciting without any boring moments because they learn new things all day long. This job with exciting moments is satisfying for all workers and they feel happy about their doing tasks rather than having similar works to do during workdays.
Secondly, workers who do different tasks all day long can learn many skills in their jobs, which causes them to be more satisfied than having similar tasks. To elucidate, when workers have many diverse duties to do, they will learn different skills in each of the tasks. These skills can be helpful for workers in their futures because they will be promoted easily due to their diverse abilities or find better jobs. In this vein, workers who do different tasks in their jobs feel more satisfied with their lives and futures. My personal experience may shed more light on this matter. When I was working in a company after graduation, I always had different tasks on workdays, like working with Matlab software, going to the factory and assessing the production process, writing reports, and so forth. Doing all of these tasks taught me different skills and improved my background. After two years working in the company, I could find a better job in a high-ranked company because of my diverse abilities, which I got in the first company.
In conclusion, with all this taken into account, I strongly believe that people who have many different works to do during the workday are happier than doing similar tasks. Not only, do they feel less boring during their work hours, but also, they learn different skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ilar works to do during workdays. Secondly, workers who do different tasks...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04086538462 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60037828488 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471153846154 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7162709588 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.368421053 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8947368421 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.501717956733 0.236089414692 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188064969373 0.076458572812 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130292554918 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.367521537508 0.150856017488 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650256211404 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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