Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Regarding wheather achieving the a sense of satisfication toward working, answers can vary considerably from individual to individual. Some people believe that different tasks make their working day more interesting, while others argues the familiar jobs are better. As far as I am concerned, my experience lead me to conclude the former is right, and I will explain why I stand the viewpoint in the following essay.
To begin with, working different jobs fufill the requirement of a sense of achievement. When I try to complete a task that I have never done before, I feel excited about the unknown challenge which encourage me to make all-out effort to finish the task. For example, when I worked as a research assistence in collage. The professor told me to read and summary an extremely difficult paper which was almost unreadable. Even though the process was taugh, I feel satisfied on it,
owing to the accomplishment of work.
Addtionally, people can learn some new skills and knowledges by doing various tasks. Comparing to do the normal project that they have already known how to haddle, people have to encourage themselves to obtain new knowledges to complete the new project. Take my experience of being a research assistence for instance, again : once my professor asked me to collect huge amount of data on the Internet. Since it was impossible to collect the huge data dirctly, I looked for the information about web crwaling and learned how to operate it by meself. Therefore, I understood the skill of web crawling after the work. In the meanwhile, the feeling of getting new knowledge cheered me and inspired me mentally.
Finally, it is tedious to work the same job every day. The jobs that have to do it repeatly are basicilly the daily chores. I believe it will be more easy to this kind of daily works, but they alienate myself from working. Futhermore, I fell its time-wasting to do a particular type of job whole day, due to the feeling of being a robot. Supposing I have to work in this way whole day, I believe I will quit soon, not to mention to be satisfied. Thus, at least for myself, doing only a individual type of task seriously depresses me.
In a nutshell, I firmly believe that having the diverse types of taskes statify me more. It is because I get a sense of achivement and learn new skills from it, and also, I cannot afford to do the daily chores all day. Given the reason above, I believe I have substaintiated reasons to support my point of view.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
Regarding wheather achieving the a sense of satisfication toward working, ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocess was taugh, I feel satisfied on it, owing to the accomplishment of work. ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 485, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... Thus, at least for myself, doing only a individual type of task seriously depre...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74712643678 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77291491178 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4076118856 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7826086957 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9130434783 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228313695933 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061308766888 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516398818395 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107437673826 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679155855027 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
Regarding wheather achieving the a sense of satisfication toward working, ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocess was taugh, I feel satisfied on it, owing to the accomplishment of work. ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 485, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... Thus, at least for myself, doing only a individual type of task seriously depre...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74712643678 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77291491178 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4076118856 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7826086957 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9130434783 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228313695933 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061308766888 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516398818395 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107437673826 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679155855027 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.